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A week after Part 2 ended, Sal and Inarius still live at the farm, although the dragon's growing size is beginning to make him a poor roommate. It's also hard to hide a big dragon, and when Inarius draws the attention of two 'guests', things around Sal's farm might up changing very quickly.
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If you want to find out what happens next, then have a read!
And please, leave me a comment, a note, or whatever! That's how I learn, and that's how I'll improve!
LS7
Next - Part 4
Previous - Part 2
Start - Part 1
Category Story / Vore
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 114px
File Size 23.8 kB
Listed in Folders
Great third chapter! While the flashbacks are well done, they might be confusing for those readers that may have started with this chapter. I'd recommend inserting a little subtitle to indicate the beginning of each flashback sequence.
Thanks, for sharing and looking forward to the next chapter!
Thanks, for sharing and looking forward to the next chapter!
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