Wow! Not often you see a bimbo story this well written! I love how their relationship is explored.

Tess x Chris OTP

This series got me into Bimbos!

That's really flattering! Sorry about the fetish!

So what exactly about this one is different from the original? I haven't found time to read the revised versions yet.

It's got the same structure, but it follows the original BXBI a lot closer in tone. The scenes with transformation in them are longer, clearer, and more detailed, and the dynamic between Tess and Chris is a lot more positive. Instead of relationship drama, the focus is on Chris slowly learning to come out of his shell and be less self-conscious.

I felt a bit embarrassed on rereading the original BXBI 2 that it seemed so mean-spirited in parts, because that was never my intention with BXBI. I made similar (though much smaller) changes to the first BXBI when I revised it last year.

Aaaaah, cool! Thanks for clearing that up!

I loved this one, always hoped for a 3rd in the series.

Unfortunately still unlikely, but at least number two is better now!

as a former erotic writer, I feel you.
People want more and you're like "But I've already explored everything I had in mind for this setting/characters/world. If I give you any more it'll be half quality crap."

this is very good!

Thanks!

I really love both of these stories, I'm so glad this is getting the classic collection treatment :)

Me too! They're some of my most popular stories so I wanted to be sure they were top notch.

I can see why, they are awesome stories. Really should get something from you someday.

I hope you post the picture for the story as well. I don't think anyone would object to it being all human :)

Now I'm wishing you had left the original versions as alternates for more of Classics Collection, particularly the "Completely Rewritten" stuff, because I'm really curious how some of them compare, and I only have some of them saved from before that.

Sorry for being super self-conscious about the quality of my work!

It's a common artist thing, and at least you're not as bad as some, who just delete all their old work without remakes and replacements.

I totally understand why people do that--honestly, if I wasn't sure people would get upset I'd probably take like half my work down because I think it's just not very good.

I must admit I liked the mean elements of the original (maybe I'm weird...I know I'm weird : p ) but regardless I still very much enjoyed this new version. Fun to revisit this one and I had actually been meaning to reread at someone before it reappeared in my watched queue : )

I know it's a preference thing but I've written other meaner stories so no worries there!

would really love to see more in this vein. This story especially was very hot and I would love to see more BXBI stories

Yeah I really hope Kotep writes another one!

A terrific sequel to an already great story! This focus on Chris experiencing the same transformation was what I was hoping for after reading the first chapter and you absolutely delivered with this one, wonderfully detailed and really quite sexy. Great work~!

I'm glad it lived up to your hopes! Thanks a lot!

For sure! It's rare to see MtF changes, especially bimbo stuff, handled in such a fun way. And I'm glad to see it backing up a positive and adorable relationship between the two girls too!

Good story and great sequel! Really wishing I had found it sooner than I did, kinda curious about the original version.

The one thing I'd really want to see is non-bimbo'ed Tess interacting with Chris after before the two week time-skip. Assuming that since she took her dosage a few hours before Chris that there would be a few hour time period of "normal her" hanging out with her bimbo'ed out boyfriend.

Glad you liked it! And don't worry, you're really not missing much.

FUCK that was so good! Since part one, I love everything from Chris and Tess' reletionship, just the whole consent of it all, how, despite the bimbo attitude and sex drive, the transformed person is still themselves and aware of their actions, just "uninhibited" on their kinks
Also everything about Chris embracing and finding enjoyment in his feminity, even if in his own words he "doesn't feel like a girl", becoming a girl, regardless of the bimbofication that comes later, and doing femenine things with Tess, or getting attention and looks towards his bimboed-out body turned out to be things he really enjoys and now indulges in regularly, the fact he can safely experience and indulge in this kinda stuff with Tess is just next level.
I don't really know how to fully describe it, it just resonated with me, I really wished I could be in Chris' position
Like, I do not feel like a girl either, but I do wish I had the ability to turn into one and back whenever, just my body changing independent of my actual gender, it being temporary is what draws me to it, as I still only really see myself as male.
The closest I'll get in this lifetime is probably cross-dressing, maybe VR, but I'm obviously mega self concious about it, but reading this I feel trough Chris like I could just walk down a mall all girled-out and go clothes shopping or getting my nails done, walking on high heels, stuff like that, not caring about people staring, maybe enjoying it even, I'm not even super into the bimbo aestethic but I could absolutely go for either Tess or Chris' outfits, also those heels Chris got, from their description it sounds like they're goregous, I need them too, of course I also wished I that if I had a girlfriend, she'd be as open and supportive of this stuff as Tess is.