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Sevlow and his other Shifters, Riget and Leo, (A tiger and lion respectively) chose to stay behind so that the rest of their companions would stand a chance of getting away. Now, they must face the consequences of their actions.
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Sevlowtyak and 
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The Maldorans are © Furrywriter
This is a continuation of http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2211728/
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Sevlow is ©
Sevlowtyak and 
FurrywriterThe Maldorans are ©
FurrywriterThis is a continuation of http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2211728/
Enjoy! And leave comments if you read!
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Tiger
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 5.5 kB
Not bad. Watch your wording though. I'm sure "normalized" is a word but I know there are better words you could have picked to elaborate that his healing stabilized him. Not a bad story though. Nice work.
Note: Just offering helpful advise; not trying to be condescending, down talking, belittling, or saying your stuff is bad in any way shape or form. Have a glorious day and keep on writing.
Note: Just offering helpful advise; not trying to be condescending, down talking, belittling, or saying your stuff is bad in any way shape or form. Have a glorious day and keep on writing.
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