Several things very wrong with the last one so here is the improved one. Head is more proportional, less muscled body as per request, walking altered to fit and tail placed higher. More detail on background that will be apparent with inking. Trousers placed higher and the feet adjusted so that they look more like they are capable of walking.

Lots of changes made in short so I hope it fits :) Apologies for the delay but I have been rather busy on a jobhunt. This is just catch up :P