
another wrote in orlando
Category Poetry / All
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Ah yes, fading away forever into NOTHINGNESS, where people are BOUND to forget you despite their trinkets, and mementos. =/
Interesting way of depicting death my furiend! =P
Your rhymes are usually well placed, and that's NO exception here! =3
My fave line would be:
"waiting for alignment
stuck in this confinement"
The rhyming of "alignment" and "confinement" was WELL done! =O
Another GOOD read K.K.! ;3
Interesting way of depicting death my furiend! =P
Your rhymes are usually well placed, and that's NO exception here! =3
My fave line would be:
"waiting for alignment
stuck in this confinement"
The rhyming of "alignment" and "confinement" was WELL done! =O
Another GOOD read K.K.! ;3
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