
Two characters I've had floating around in my head for awhile and finally managed to draw in some fashion. Very rough and sketchy, but I'd like to try to clean it up a bit and maybe even put some simple colour on it at some point.
The one on the left is Rasmus, who is a goth reindeer. He is something like 6'5" or 6'6", plus probably another foot of antlers. Doorways are not his friend. He's a hell of a masochist and just generally a bit depraved. The button-up shirt isn't to look fancy, but rather a necessity since he obviously can't pull a shirt over his head. Also, how he actually found skinny jeans that fit his legs is a mystery.
On the right is Tanya, who is a polar bear and a scary punk girl. She's 6'0"; she only looks short next to Rasmus. She's quite strong and could probably snap him in half. Her and Rasmus are sort of in a very open relationship, like a BDSM version of 'friends with benefits'.
Together they form a pair for me to create random kinky art and stories of!
The one on the left is Rasmus, who is a goth reindeer. He is something like 6'5" or 6'6", plus probably another foot of antlers. Doorways are not his friend. He's a hell of a masochist and just generally a bit depraved. The button-up shirt isn't to look fancy, but rather a necessity since he obviously can't pull a shirt over his head. Also, how he actually found skinny jeans that fit his legs is a mystery.
On the right is Tanya, who is a polar bear and a scary punk girl. She's 6'0"; she only looks short next to Rasmus. She's quite strong and could probably snap him in half. Her and Rasmus are sort of in a very open relationship, like a BDSM version of 'friends with benefits'.
Together they form a pair for me to create random kinky art and stories of!
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Cervine (Other)
Size 436 x 650px
File Size 83.6 kB
I know it says you love critique on your profile, but I just thought it would be polite to ask first. Now my critique is based on the assumption you're going for realistic anatomy (I know some artists might purposely make their characters disproportional to make them look toony). Anyway, I noticed this. As beautifully beefy as Tanya's arms are, it looks like they're disproportionally long. Like her right arm, she has it slung around Rasmus, but her knuckles still manage to reach her waist. If she let her arms down, it looks like they could reach her knees, when they should reach half-way down her thighs at most. If you look at a person standing idle, their hands will be resting just a bit below waistline.
That's the only thing that's really noticeable. But besides that, her thighs are looking a bit short and they could use some beefing up to match her arms. Right now it looks like her arms and thighs are about the same thickness, when the thighs should be at least a bit thicker.
It sounds like you're going more for some sort of artistic erotica with BDSM themes? Just say you're drawing erotica instead of porn, then you can feel classy.
That's the only thing that's really noticeable. But besides that, her thighs are looking a bit short and they could use some beefing up to match her arms. Right now it looks like her arms and thighs are about the same thickness, when the thighs should be at least a bit thicker.
It sounds like you're going more for some sort of artistic erotica with BDSM themes? Just say you're drawing erotica instead of porn, then you can feel classy.
The intent at least is that she's supposed to have slightly long arms and be kinda oddly top-heavy for the bearlike look...but that one arm confused me a lot especially, since I totally couldn't figure out where her hand should be. You're right, it really is obviously too long now that I'm looking at it again. I'll have to try messing around with the other things too when/if I get around to cleaning this up. Critique and politeness are both appreciated!
Erotica is probably the right word! And even if it isn't, it does sound classy, so I'll go with that. XD
Erotica is probably the right word! And even if it isn't, it does sound classy, so I'll go with that. XD
Ah, but are those also their actual nationalities? (Although Scandanavian isn't really a nationality) Maybe you haven't decided on that. I just thought you might have since it's official Spike is British.
I can see how Rasmus would sound cool to a native English-speaker, but in Scandanavia it's just sort of a generic name, heh. It's one of those names like John or Sarah, everybody has had a classmate named Rasmus.
I can see how Rasmus would sound cool to a native English-speaker, but in Scandanavia it's just sort of a generic name, heh. It's one of those names like John or Sarah, everybody has had a classmate named Rasmus.
Their actual nationalities are British as with Spike (just non-British family history in their cases), since I have some other minor characters I imagine occupying the same setting who have more typical English-speaking names. And write/draw what you know, etc.
And yeah, the name probably does sound cool to me since it's not a name I usually see. XD But I also just like the sounds. It amuses me to realise that John or Sarah sound cool and unusual to somebody...logically I should know that, but it's still an odd though, haha.
And yeah, the name probably does sound cool to me since it's not a name I usually see. XD But I also just like the sounds. It amuses me to realise that John or Sarah sound cool and unusual to somebody...logically I should know that, but it's still an odd though, haha.
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