
It was valentines and Harry and Diana were watching TV together. Then Harry looked outside and noticed that it was really sunny. Harry said "what a lovely day" and Diana replied with "I agree".
Then Harry said to Diana "why don't we go outside for a little walk?". Then Diana replied back to Harry saying "of course we can". Then Harry turned the television and they got up from the sofa.
Then Diana picked up the keys and they walked out the door and Diana locked it. So they both went off for their little walk then they arrived in a field. Diana said "what a lovely day..." but Harry was looking elsewhere.
Harry then said to Diana "Hey.. What's that?" but Diana was confused. Then Diana said "What's what honey?" as harry pointed to a lamp. Then Diana had a little look at it then said to Harry "A lamp?!".
Then Harry reached over it and picked it to have a closer look at it. Then Harry rubbed it and a genie appeared and said "What are your 3 wishes?". Then Harry said "This is our chance, remember our sexual fantasies".
Harry said "Of course I do" then "I wish my girlfriend was and Ho-Oh". Then harry said his second wish which was "I wish I was a Lugia". Finally Harry said his third and final wish "I wish that there was no way for us to be human again".
Then Harry's head was starting to turn all white as it was being covered by scales. Harry was really happy that this was happening to him and let it continue. Then His hair fell out and landed on the grass in front of his feet.
Then his nose also merged right into his face as his mouth changed. Harry looked at his new mouth and it looked like lugia's mouth. Then his eyes moved to the side of his head as blue triangles formed around them.
Then something white started to form from the back of his head. Then Harry's skull changed shape to match the shape of his new head. Then Harry's neck also turned white and got longer and his bones got longer as well.
Then he turned his face to look at Diana as she is about to change as well. Then Diana's head was being covered in red feathers instead of scales. Then her mouth turned yellow as it extended outwards into a beak.
Her ears and nose merged into her head and here eyes moved to the side of her head. Then black feathers formed around her eyes to form little rings. Then her hair turned into big yellow feathers on the top of her head.
Then Diana's neck got longer as red feathers formed on her neck. Then green feathers formed on her neck to form a green line around her neck. Then Diana had at herself and Harry then said "Best day ever!".
Then Diana's top teared off revealing a red belly with white on the front. Then her belly got a little bit more bulkier as here insides changed. Then her legs got shorter as they were covered in white feathers.
Then Here big to moved to the back of her foot as the others merged into three. Then her feet were being covered in blue feet and she said "Much nicer than my old feet!". Then feathers were covering her arms now and they were red, white and green.
Now her arms turned into wings once they got a lot thinner now. Then Harry's arms were being covered in white scales as his hands got bigger. His hands also got more flat making him able to fly now like a Lugia.
Then His top teared off revealing a white belly with blue on the front. Then six blue scales formed on his back and they were square shape. Then his shoes and trousers teared a bit as his legs moved up a bit.
Then his legs and feet were covered in white scales now as his feet were bigger. Also his toes merged together to form three toes but Harry liked it. Then a white tail with blue scales at the end formed which meant new bones.
Then while it was happening, Harry said "The tail is the best part!". Then yellow tail feathers started to form for Diana now which she enjoyed. Then Harry went "Gaaaahhh!" and Diana was looking at him.
Then Diana bent down and said "No the best part is making you feel better". Then she grabbed his trousers and said "using my new Ho-Oh beak to suck your new Lugia di-". Then Harry said "I completely forgot Ho-Oh and Lugia were genderless".
Diana then said "Well that's just great!" as she held Harry's tail with her feet. While his tail was held, Harry said "I can feel pleasure in my tail!". Then Harry and Diana spent the rest of their life as Lugia and Ho-Oh.
Then Harry said to Diana "why don't we go outside for a little walk?". Then Diana replied back to Harry saying "of course we can". Then Harry turned the television and they got up from the sofa.
Then Diana picked up the keys and they walked out the door and Diana locked it. So they both went off for their little walk then they arrived in a field. Diana said "what a lovely day..." but Harry was looking elsewhere.
Harry then said to Diana "Hey.. What's that?" but Diana was confused. Then Diana said "What's what honey?" as harry pointed to a lamp. Then Diana had a little look at it then said to Harry "A lamp?!".
Then Harry reached over it and picked it to have a closer look at it. Then Harry rubbed it and a genie appeared and said "What are your 3 wishes?". Then Harry said "This is our chance, remember our sexual fantasies".
Harry said "Of course I do" then "I wish my girlfriend was and Ho-Oh". Then harry said his second wish which was "I wish I was a Lugia". Finally Harry said his third and final wish "I wish that there was no way for us to be human again".
Then Harry's head was starting to turn all white as it was being covered by scales. Harry was really happy that this was happening to him and let it continue. Then His hair fell out and landed on the grass in front of his feet.
Then his nose also merged right into his face as his mouth changed. Harry looked at his new mouth and it looked like lugia's mouth. Then his eyes moved to the side of his head as blue triangles formed around them.
Then something white started to form from the back of his head. Then Harry's skull changed shape to match the shape of his new head. Then Harry's neck also turned white and got longer and his bones got longer as well.
Then he turned his face to look at Diana as she is about to change as well. Then Diana's head was being covered in red feathers instead of scales. Then her mouth turned yellow as it extended outwards into a beak.
Her ears and nose merged into her head and here eyes moved to the side of her head. Then black feathers formed around her eyes to form little rings. Then her hair turned into big yellow feathers on the top of her head.
Then Diana's neck got longer as red feathers formed on her neck. Then green feathers formed on her neck to form a green line around her neck. Then Diana had at herself and Harry then said "Best day ever!".
Then Diana's top teared off revealing a red belly with white on the front. Then her belly got a little bit more bulkier as here insides changed. Then her legs got shorter as they were covered in white feathers.
Then Here big to moved to the back of her foot as the others merged into three. Then her feet were being covered in blue feet and she said "Much nicer than my old feet!". Then feathers were covering her arms now and they were red, white and green.
Now her arms turned into wings once they got a lot thinner now. Then Harry's arms were being covered in white scales as his hands got bigger. His hands also got more flat making him able to fly now like a Lugia.
Then His top teared off revealing a white belly with blue on the front. Then six blue scales formed on his back and they were square shape. Then his shoes and trousers teared a bit as his legs moved up a bit.
Then his legs and feet were covered in white scales now as his feet were bigger. Also his toes merged together to form three toes but Harry liked it. Then a white tail with blue scales at the end formed which meant new bones.
Then while it was happening, Harry said "The tail is the best part!". Then yellow tail feathers started to form for Diana now which she enjoyed. Then Harry went "Gaaaahhh!" and Diana was looking at him.
Then Diana bent down and said "No the best part is making you feel better". Then she grabbed his trousers and said "using my new Ho-Oh beak to suck your new Lugia di-". Then Harry said "I completely forgot Ho-Oh and Lugia were genderless".
Diana then said "Well that's just great!" as she held Harry's tail with her feet. While his tail was held, Harry said "I can feel pleasure in my tail!". Then Harry and Diana spent the rest of their life as Lugia and Ho-Oh.
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A few pointers if you want to get into writing.
Don't start every sentence with "Then" or "And then". It makes the story drag and feel repetitive.
ADD DETAILS! I cannot stress this enough, but you must always add detail. I can see you tried to put some details in, but you need to put in WAY more than just this.
Make the story longer. This is about two paragraphs of uninteresting fluff. A fantastic way to make any story better is just to draw out everything as long as you can without making the story drag on or repeating yourself.
This is just my own personal opinion, but the characters had almost no emotion to them. Fix that later.
I hope that these tips help you in the future if you ever try to pursue writing.
Don't start every sentence with "Then" or "And then". It makes the story drag and feel repetitive.
ADD DETAILS! I cannot stress this enough, but you must always add detail. I can see you tried to put some details in, but you need to put in WAY more than just this.
Make the story longer. This is about two paragraphs of uninteresting fluff. A fantastic way to make any story better is just to draw out everything as long as you can without making the story drag on or repeating yourself.
This is just my own personal opinion, but the characters had almost no emotion to them. Fix that later.
I hope that these tips help you in the future if you ever try to pursue writing.
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