
So, I'm finally writing the story! I'll probably do it on a chapter by chapter basis.
I know I had an auction and a vote for the story, but I deleted those threads since they didn't lead to anything. It was a dumb idea so I'm just going to write it the way I was going to all along.
This isn't the main story, and it is entirely skippable. It just sets up the main character and goes into some of the details of his personality and why he chose to be a lizard.
It also sets up a little world building. This is meant to be as realistic and scientifically accurate as possible. Since I'm creating my own literary universe, this story also describes why there are furries and how you become one. It gets a little wordy, and kinda technical in some parts. Its just my idea of what you would have to go through to actually transform.
Which is why i'm leaving this out of the main story.
Also, I really DO want to create a company to develop this. I just need to get my master's or philosopher's degree and design proper procedures and genetic models to pitch to an investor for funding.
I posted this under the category of bondage, even though it doesn't have any in it. But its part of a story that will have copious amounts of it, so I'll keep em all under the same category.
This has been proofread and edited once, by me. Since I'd need a fresh pair of eyes to look for the less obvious mistakes, there are bound to be one or two I missed. Please let me know if you catch any.
Oh, and I mention nanites in this story, also calling them nano bots. Well as far as I know there is no such thing yet, and the ones that have been developed are nowhere near small enough to manipulate cellular components and DNA. I will explain what the nanites ACTUALLY are in the main story. The company just calls them nanites so as not to frighten customers off. If you can guess what they actually are, I'll send you a telepathic image of a cookie!
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I know I had an auction and a vote for the story, but I deleted those threads since they didn't lead to anything. It was a dumb idea so I'm just going to write it the way I was going to all along.
This isn't the main story, and it is entirely skippable. It just sets up the main character and goes into some of the details of his personality and why he chose to be a lizard.
It also sets up a little world building. This is meant to be as realistic and scientifically accurate as possible. Since I'm creating my own literary universe, this story also describes why there are furries and how you become one. It gets a little wordy, and kinda technical in some parts. Its just my idea of what you would have to go through to actually transform.
Which is why i'm leaving this out of the main story.
Also, I really DO want to create a company to develop this. I just need to get my master's or philosopher's degree and design proper procedures and genetic models to pitch to an investor for funding.
I posted this under the category of bondage, even though it doesn't have any in it. But its part of a story that will have copious amounts of it, so I'll keep em all under the same category.
This has been proofread and edited once, by me. Since I'd need a fresh pair of eyes to look for the less obvious mistakes, there are bound to be one or two I missed. Please let me know if you catch any.
Oh, and I mention nanites in this story, also calling them nano bots. Well as far as I know there is no such thing yet, and the ones that have been developed are nowhere near small enough to manipulate cellular components and DNA. I will explain what the nanites ACTUALLY are in the main story. The company just calls them nanites so as not to frighten customers off. If you can guess what they actually are, I'll send you a telepathic image of a cookie!
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Category Story / Bondage
Species Lizard
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 35.1 kB
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Very detailed and scientifically grounded, which is pretty cool for TF fiction. Loved reading through it.
I'll say the word choice was a little awkward in spots in the first couple of paragraphs, otherwise it was very well-done on the technical level.
Hopefully we get an update from the first and second year visits as well!
I'll say the word choice was a little awkward in spots in the first couple of paragraphs, otherwise it was very well-done on the technical level.
Hopefully we get an update from the first and second year visits as well!
Thanks! Nahh, i'm going to go straight to chapter 1. I kind of glossed over the after-treatments (which I failed to mention is where most of the price goes) since they are pretty simple and already well known in medical literature.
So all you really need to know is in the "epilogue" (the future tense part at the end)
So all you really need to know is in the "epilogue" (the future tense part at the end)
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