Well, I can't really find a good way to comment. It's really good, don't get me wrong, better than most of what I write, but It's just written oddly compared to most stuff I like.

I can't really relate to most of it, being a metalhead, but I can relate to this part:

"There, I�m a geek, hated by all mankind,
There, I�m a New Ager bound to fail.
There, I�m a Goth doomed to die,
There, I�m a dreamer crying for his dream-
And seeing only that all think it is a lie
Of idiots that strong must seem."

Pretty powerful stuff, man. I can't help but favorite it. Also, not saying you ripped them off, but that part sounds like it could be in a Death song, you'd probably like them if you can stand death metal. Your writing style is a lot like Chuck Schuldiner's was.

Try 'THAT KID IS A PUNK', or 'Yours truly, Rebel Ferret'. They are silly, compared to this, but they deal with the more powerful sides of being different. And, I feel honored that you enjoyed my work. Watch right back at ya!