Nice work Danny, much better written than the inflation/fat growth one before it (and I'm not just saying that due to being more into human-to-anthro muscle TFs either--this one's got better grammar, sentence structure, and flow as well).

You described the process of the change very well, not rushing but not dwelling on it for way too long either. It's very good set-up. Will there be a sequel with some action in it?

Great story O would love to read more like this