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This was a collab that I did with 
Artoochu2014. He came up with the concept, and we wrote it by sort of switching off each time one of us wrote a paragraph. After that, I made a few edits to sort of smooth it out and make it flow better. We'll probably be continuing this in the future
As usual, I welcome constructive criticism, and until next time, I'm Robert Dayson, signing off!
Artoochu2014. He came up with the concept, and we wrote it by sort of switching off each time one of us wrote a paragraph. After that, I made a few edits to sort of smooth it out and make it flow better. We'll probably be continuing this in the future As usual, I welcome constructive criticism, and until next time, I'm Robert Dayson, signing off!
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Reptiles against furries? I think you mean mammals since an antro reptile is technically a furry...
Anyway good story, it would be interesting to expand the plot with some of their training and difficulty of adapting to a new form in the future chapters. Might throw in a plot twist where they don't want to go back once the war is over!
Anyway good story, it would be interesting to expand the plot with some of their training and difficulty of adapting to a new form in the future chapters. Might throw in a plot twist where they don't want to go back once the war is over!
I think there's some disagreement regarding terminology in the community. I know some people refer to anthro reptiles as "scalies," but I guess there are others who just use "furries" as a blanket term for all anthropomorphic animals.
Anyway, thanks for the suggestions. I'll try to keep them in mind.
Anyway, thanks for the suggestions. I'll try to keep them in mind.
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