This is my entry for
MagicalTF's Shapeshifters Monthly contest on DeviantArt. I was trying to write something more humorous this time around, and I think it turned out pretty well!
As usual, I welcome constructive criticism, and until next time, I'm Robert Dayson, signing off!
MagicalTF's Shapeshifters Monthly contest on DeviantArt. I was trying to write something more humorous this time around, and I think it turned out pretty well!As usual, I welcome constructive criticism, and until next time, I'm Robert Dayson, signing off!
Category Story / Transformation
Species Horse
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 17.2 kB
Interesting story, but why would he willingly let his clothes get torn apart? He knew the change was coming, knew what it meant when it started, and did nothing.
I'd hate to see the cost of his wardrobe in the future if that's his standard practice. Clothes aren't cheap, especially shoes.
I'd hate to see the cost of his wardrobe in the future if that's his standard practice. Clothes aren't cheap, especially shoes.
Well, he's not really the type to think ahead... perhaps he simply liked the feeling of tearing through them, since it showed how powerful he was becoming.
I don't know, I was kinda trying to experiment with the whole "getting bigger and clothes tearing apart" sort of thing in this story, so I didn't really think about the logic behind it.
I don't know, I was kinda trying to experiment with the whole "getting bigger and clothes tearing apart" sort of thing in this story, so I didn't really think about the logic behind it.
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