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lonewolfhowling
lonewolfhowling
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Canine (Other)
Size 1200 x 848px
File Size 327.5 kB
I forgot to comment. =P
First, I'm in love with the cafeteria. Everything blends perfectly. It feels very real, nothing really strikes me as out of place, except maybe the bottles in the upper part, just a little bit.
Second, what you did with the lighting is marvelous. I don't know why do I feel like he's very cold, though. Maybe it is due to all the blue in the scene. It makes me want to put a sweater over him.
The only thing that bugs me a little is Bryce's pose. I don't know if it is because of the perspective, but it makes me feel that, instead of walking, he is standing in one leg...
Mmm... No, wait, I think it has to do more with the fact that his right feet is actually too high and his arms are reversed (the left arm should be ahead).
Keep up the great work, man. Your artwork is really amazing!
First, I'm in love with the cafeteria. Everything blends perfectly. It feels very real, nothing really strikes me as out of place, except maybe the bottles in the upper part, just a little bit.
Second, what you did with the lighting is marvelous. I don't know why do I feel like he's very cold, though. Maybe it is due to all the blue in the scene. It makes me want to put a sweater over him.
The only thing that bugs me a little is Bryce's pose. I don't know if it is because of the perspective, but it makes me feel that, instead of walking, he is standing in one leg...
Mmm... No, wait, I think it has to do more with the fact that his right feet is actually too high and his arms are reversed (the left arm should be ahead).
Keep up the great work, man. Your artwork is really amazing!
I do not understand why people talk about mistakes when I can not fix them any more. Also I do not understand why people think that I do not see my mistakes. This work took a lot of energy and time from me and probably during the work I did not see a problem with the character's pose. Now I see everything perfectly and talking about it was superfluous. Thanks for the comment.
Nope, you're absolutely right: you can't fix this mistakes anymore but what you can you is take them in account for your next piece.
I really meant no harm or offense, trust me. In the past, people used to ask me "Hey, how does this look?", and I would tell them "Amazing!" or "Incredible!" or maybe "That's really good!".
That was until a friend of mine actually told me "But, that doesn't help me at all! I won't be able to improve if you only tell me nice things and such". And I came to realize that she was actually right. I know the time and effort it takes to make something like this, but the true juice and value of feedback lies in how does it help you to improve, it's not as superfluous as you may think.
I actually still have a lot to learn and practice before I can actually reach your level, but I still think I can make a little contribution.
I really meant no harm or offense, trust me. In the past, people used to ask me "Hey, how does this look?", and I would tell them "Amazing!" or "Incredible!" or maybe "That's really good!".
That was until a friend of mine actually told me "But, that doesn't help me at all! I won't be able to improve if you only tell me nice things and such". And I came to realize that she was actually right. I know the time and effort it takes to make something like this, but the true juice and value of feedback lies in how does it help you to improve, it's not as superfluous as you may think.
I actually still have a lot to learn and practice before I can actually reach your level, but I still think I can make a little contribution.
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