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Eyes in the Dark pg. 22
WOW! This is a blast from the past This is page 22 of a children's book that I did when I was in school. I...just like this page It's the first time Shadow meets Dart. ...I bet you can guess who's who! Anyway, I think I will have to one day redo this. I really enjoyed working on it...moreso than working on comics. This might be the way that I need to work. But, we'll see
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Thank you very much! ^_^ Yes, Dart is a wolf, but Shadow is also a wolf. It's...a long story. I should probably upload the rest of it. It's slightly embarrassing since it's quite old, though. The drawings aren't the best and the writing, I've come to realize, could be a lot better. But, perhaps I'll get the rest of it up, even so ^_^
Aww, you're the sweetest!! *glomps* Actually, that is the problem with the writing as I look at it now. It wasn't simple enough for a children's book. I didn't notice it before, but I had a few complex words in it that I could have substituted for something else. But, I think I will show the rest of it so you can judge for yourself
You shouldn't be embarrassed of you old art. Sometimes easier said than done, (I sometimes want to delete my older submissions too) but if it's embarrassing, it simply shows you've gotten better. And in this case I bet there are a lot of people that look at it and still simply think "I wish I could do that".
These puppies are so cute and the story too from what I can tell... I love it!
... wish I could do that!
These puppies are so cute and the story too from what I can tell... I love it!
... wish I could do that!
*can't help but giggle*
Ohhh, hahaha... that is just so cute, and that last line! Oh man that had me giggling! "See what I could smell"... I can totally understand that line ina children's book, and even for grown-up fiction it's a completely correct line, but I just still find it very funny! =~.^=
Ohhh, hahaha... that is just so cute, and that last line! Oh man that had me giggling! "See what I could smell"... I can totally understand that line ina children's book, and even for grown-up fiction it's a completely correct line, but I just still find it very funny! =~.^=
*giggles cheerfully and helps the lioness back up*
Hee hee, you're welcome! Hee, and yes, as a writer and a born proofreader, I could totally not help seeing that line and finding it really amusing! And looking at all the comments and your responses to it, I can only say; yay! I will be so looking forward to seeing the entire story! I have no doubt I am going to be enjoying it so very very much! =^_^=
Hee hee, you're welcome! Hee, and yes, as a writer and a born proofreader, I could totally not help seeing that line and finding it really amusing! And looking at all the comments and your responses to it, I can only say; yay! I will be so looking forward to seeing the entire story! I have no doubt I am going to be enjoying it so very very much! =^_^=
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