Alright, so like....this poem was written in exactly ONE day (really 6 hours or so)! That's RIDICULOUSLY fast for me! The best part is...I friggin LOVE it! \(^o^)/
The speaker of the poem can be seen as an INVISIBLE watcher of none other than HIMSELF/HERSELF! (o.O)
Yep, it's like the speaker is going throughout his day (being watched by a SPIRITUAL version of himself/herself), BUT what the speaker is saying is actually UNKNOWN to the LIVING him/her (something like that)! I'm sure it'll make more sense when ya read it. x3
Oh right, I owe
riddle_me_this for the production of THIS piece. I actually HAD this concept made months ago. It was one of my DROPPED pieces, BUT...after we chatted, it just seemed to REkindle (thanks man). =D
Well, ENJOY guys! ^^
Until next poem! =P
The speaker of the poem can be seen as an INVISIBLE watcher of none other than HIMSELF/HERSELF! (o.O)
Yep, it's like the speaker is going throughout his day (being watched by a SPIRITUAL version of himself/herself), BUT what the speaker is saying is actually UNKNOWN to the LIVING him/her (something like that)! I'm sure it'll make more sense when ya read it. x3
Oh right, I owe
riddle_me_this for the production of THIS piece. I actually HAD this concept made months ago. It was one of my DROPPED pieces, BUT...after we chatted, it just seemed to REkindle (thanks man). =DWell, ENJOY guys! ^^
Until next poem! =P
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Damn. I thought I was a modest poet but... this is what a poet does, that's an amazing piece D! Wow... it's so true, it applies to all of us, and those last two lines
....I find it comforting
that such a fate is strictly fair.
They give me chills! An excellent piece sir, this makes me want to go back and read everything you've done!
....I find it comforting
that such a fate is strictly fair.
They give me chills! An excellent piece sir, this makes me want to go back and read everything you've done!
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