Fursona : Feng Deadshot
Requester :
hioku
Practice Focuses: Hands, Fur, Pose, Shading
Side Notes:
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Heya, this one was just spontaneous compared to the first, since he got the idea stuck in my head, anyway, he wanted to see fists and I think I did a damn good job on them, and he wanted fur...but I don't think I did that as well as I should have...
I added in Pose cause he asked, and I think it came out awesome, and I also added in shading cause it came out to the fact that it needed A LOT OF SHADING!
EDIT: Reposted because I forgot to color the goatee and eyes, as well as add the green to the hair... (There were also random grey lines all over the face...)
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ILoveCritique
Artwork ©
Me~<3
Requester :
hiokuPractice Focuses: Hands, Fur, Pose, Shading
Side Notes:
~This Was USTREAMED~
Heya, this one was just spontaneous compared to the first, since he got the idea stuck in my head, anyway, he wanted to see fists and I think I did a damn good job on them, and he wanted fur...but I don't think I did that as well as I should have...
I added in Pose cause he asked, and I think it came out awesome, and I also added in shading cause it came out to the fact that it needed A LOT OF SHADING!
EDIT: Reposted because I forgot to color the goatee and eyes, as well as add the green to the hair... (There were also random grey lines all over the face...)
**Refresh to see if it isn't there**
PLEASE CRITIQUE THIS, THANK YOU!!!
ILoveCritiqueArtwork ©
Me~<3
Category All / All
Species Dog (Other)
Size 600 x 800px
File Size 279.8 kB
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The powerful pose, with you bending over is greatly drawn. And the blood-red sky adds more dramatic to the entire picture, and the ground is typically used with dramatic events, so great thinking. The hands are very good, but they should be a bit more "to the body"; a bit closer, and a bit raised. Then it'd look even better. The hoodie is spectacular with it's pattern, it needs more gravity though, like, it's dragged down by gravity, or it might just be the wind who's lifting the fabric? The pants have a really nice shading and pose with the body's. The head is very good drawn, the fur is outstanding. Very great drawn, needs a few improvements, but is great over-all. I don't know what happened to your eye's color, maybe they get silver when you're on a rampage?
The powerful pose, with you bending over is greatly drawn. And the blood-red sky adds more dramatic to the entire picture, and the ground is typically used with dramatic events, so great thinking. The hands are very good, but they should be a bit more "to the body"; a bit closer, and a bit raised. Then it'd look even better. The hoodie is spectacular with it's pattern, it needs more gravity though, like, it's dragged down by gravity, or it might just be the wind who's lifting the fabric? The pants have a really nice shading and pose with the body's. The head is very good drawn, the fur is outstanding. Very great drawn, needs a few improvements, but is great over-all. I don't know what happened to your eye's color, maybe they get silver when you're on a rampage?
First of all: great backgroundX33 and the red light also came out great. The fists are very good, and fur... jeah, dunno, you can see a little improvement at the hairs, but at the rest=> fur is always hard to show^__^""" I think the pose is really something "unnormal" and you did it brilliantX3 but KooriKitsune mentioned, the arms are a little bit "extra". Usually the elbows are closer to the body, I guess. A friend uses photos, so that he can get cleare imagination of his pictures, maybe you could use it too^^ But I think, it is a really really magnificent image, and it's obvious that you got better in a few thingsX3
THIS IS EPIC. I love this! :D
Critique? Umm... only thing I see is that he should cast a gray shadow and the rest of the ground should be red because he'd be blocking the red light. :)
But other than that it's great and very action-y!!
:D I really need to add more action in my own art.
Critique? Umm... only thing I see is that he should cast a gray shadow and the rest of the ground should be red because he'd be blocking the red light. :)
But other than that it's great and very action-y!!
:D I really need to add more action in my own art.
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