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The following is a surprise birthday gift for one of my favorite artists on this website, 
NoctoNommer
I initially intended to write a story with Killer Croc or Venom, but then, I saw a series of awesome stories written by Rchlis herself, and got to bare witness to her two amazing OC characters, "Q and Jhordah." And after seeing that epic picture she drew on top of that for Pride Month, (the avatar of this story is for a great drawing Rchlis made here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/23987893/ ) I decided to do my homework, and write a story based off of her characters instead.
It was admittedly tricky, since the stories were my first real exposure to them, but with any luck, this is at least semi-accurate to their personalities.
Happy belated birthday, Rchlis! Hope you had a great day, and I hope this proves to be a worthwhile birthday gift!
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY RUBS, BLOATING, BURPING, IMPLIED VORE, WEIGHT GAIN.
Not your thing? Don't read. :-P
NoctoNommer I initially intended to write a story with Killer Croc or Venom, but then, I saw a series of awesome stories written by Rchlis herself, and got to bare witness to her two amazing OC characters, "Q and Jhordah." And after seeing that epic picture she drew on top of that for Pride Month, (the avatar of this story is for a great drawing Rchlis made here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/23987893/ ) I decided to do my homework, and write a story based off of her characters instead.
It was admittedly tricky, since the stories were my first real exposure to them, but with any luck, this is at least semi-accurate to their personalities.
Happy belated birthday, Rchlis! Hope you had a great day, and I hope this proves to be a worthwhile birthday gift!
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY RUBS, BLOATING, BURPING, IMPLIED VORE, WEIGHT GAIN.
Not your thing? Don't read. :-P
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Alien (Other)
Size 120 x 98px
File Size 114.9 kB
Listed in Folders
This is absolutely FANTASTIC. I love how descriptive you are in all the stories you've posted, and this is no exception.
Despite this being the first time you've written about these characters and this universe, you've captured it all beautifully. Jhordah is lovably rowdy and crass, but you managed to capture that softer, sensitive, even cuddly side of her as well. And of course, Q's flustered, yet entranced reaction to her girlfriend stuffing herself silly was absolutely hilarious. Most importantly, you wrote their relationship and interactions perfectly. They're polar opposites, and they both have things they need to work on (like Jhordah's organization skills. Seriously, that orange in the garbage disposal and "Hovercraft Weekly" left me rolling XD), but you conveyed how much they truly get along when all's said and done. They're just adorable, simple as that.
And of course, the stuffing and feeding scenes...absolutely divine. The details were great, and I loved how eager Q was to "lend a hand" during the meal. I haven't written or drawn much of Big J getting fed by her girlfriend, but this is exactly how it would unfold in my head. And the little bit of implied vore was a nice touch ^^.
Thank you so much for this awesome gift!
Despite this being the first time you've written about these characters and this universe, you've captured it all beautifully. Jhordah is lovably rowdy and crass, but you managed to capture that softer, sensitive, even cuddly side of her as well. And of course, Q's flustered, yet entranced reaction to her girlfriend stuffing herself silly was absolutely hilarious. Most importantly, you wrote their relationship and interactions perfectly. They're polar opposites, and they both have things they need to work on (like Jhordah's organization skills. Seriously, that orange in the garbage disposal and "Hovercraft Weekly" left me rolling XD), but you conveyed how much they truly get along when all's said and done. They're just adorable, simple as that.
And of course, the stuffing and feeding scenes...absolutely divine. The details were great, and I loved how eager Q was to "lend a hand" during the meal. I haven't written or drawn much of Big J getting fed by her girlfriend, but this is exactly how it would unfold in my head. And the little bit of implied vore was a nice touch ^^.
Thank you so much for this awesome gift!
Thank you very much! I'm so glad I was able to do these two justice and that you enjoyed the story as a whole!
The stories you posted were a big help, especially with dialogue. Q seemed the very organized, well spoken, sometimes jittery and uneasy one of the two. And Jhordah was a rowdy, fun loving, glutton with a heart of gold.
The saying that "Opposites attract" was part of what I got from your stories, (as well as Q's unspoken fetishes, of which, I'm sure we can all relate ) but through all the traits that would otherwise drive partners away, there's something stronger between them, that overcomes anything. And I love that in writing, especially when there's room for potential friction, and characters like yours finding ways to work through those unpleasantries.
And of course, I'm glad to hear the stuffing and feeding parts were to your liking. I confess, that was actually why I asked you some time ago what sort of things you wanted to see in any potential story, and you noted on the feeding part, particularly one refusing to eat until another stepped in and fed away.
Once again, I'm very happy to hear that you liked this story. And hope you had a very happy birthday!
The stories you posted were a big help, especially with dialogue. Q seemed the very organized, well spoken, sometimes jittery and uneasy one of the two. And Jhordah was a rowdy, fun loving, glutton with a heart of gold.
The saying that "Opposites attract" was part of what I got from your stories, (as well as Q's unspoken fetishes, of which, I'm sure we can all relate ) but through all the traits that would otherwise drive partners away, there's something stronger between them, that overcomes anything. And I love that in writing, especially when there's room for potential friction, and characters like yours finding ways to work through those unpleasantries.
And of course, I'm glad to hear the stuffing and feeding parts were to your liking. I confess, that was actually why I asked you some time ago what sort of things you wanted to see in any potential story, and you noted on the feeding part, particularly one refusing to eat until another stepped in and fed away.
Once again, I'm very happy to hear that you liked this story. And hope you had a very happy birthday!
I'm glad that the stories helped out a lot. Reminds me I really need to make official bios for them...whenever that may be. ^^;
And "opposites attract" is right on the money. But I really love how you showed that they still have a lot in common, from their skills in engineering, to their, well, rather bizzare fascination. And those similarities and differences makes the story work so well.
And now that question you asked me a while back suddenly makes a lot more sense XD.
And "opposites attract" is right on the money. But I really love how you showed that they still have a lot in common, from their skills in engineering, to their, well, rather bizzare fascination. And those similarities and differences makes the story work so well.
And now that question you asked me a while back suddenly makes a lot more sense XD.
Cool beans. I'll be looking forward to those.
That's basically what I hoped to convey, so I'm very glad that worked out! Part of what I really liked was that, in the stories, despite their differences, there was a lot the two had in common which seemed to even surprise each other. And at times, their differences worked to complement one another instead of just breeding conflict. Which shows different isn't always bad.
Yeah, I'm a sneaky nugget sometimes.
That's basically what I hoped to convey, so I'm very glad that worked out! Part of what I really liked was that, in the stories, despite their differences, there was a lot the two had in common which seemed to even surprise each other. And at times, their differences worked to complement one another instead of just breeding conflict. Which shows different isn't always bad.
Yeah, I'm a sneaky nugget sometimes.
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