Looking for some friendly helpful critiques before I start cutting up foam, I'd love to have some opinions from the community! I'm working on my Ashers ( NSFW http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15427308/ ) fursuit and I wanted to know what everyone else thought. I want to take cosplay and fursuiting more seriously, and even start up crafting commissions if my work seems to be quality enough!!

Any advice or thoughts anyone has is highly appreciated. This is my first fursuit, and I aim to be done by September, but I have no set deadline so there's no real rush.
I'm normally not good at patterns, but I really like this run of the ears and so does my mother, so if you have any opinions, please share!

Thank you so much for your thoughts ~ <3