I really like these lines for some reason.
“Aw, what’s the matter?” The bulge in Michael’s pants eliminated whatever civility or chivalry the boy possessed. “Come on, I know you want me.”

Whatever small feelings Michael had cultivated in Mila quickly evaporated as his brutish nature revealed itself.
It's really nice to see a "nice predator" outed like that.

Yeah, it's always those conniving, "nice guy" predators that are the real sickos, and it was fun crafting a story around one getting his comeuppance.

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Um I'm in a bit of a crusade to tell people to try to change the name of that "Nice Guy" stigism to "nice romantic" and "nice predator" as it's a better name than "Nice Guy" and less of a common phrase. Since it's kind of like saying "them" as "THEM" to refer to zombies and it gets kind of confusing.
The "Nice Romantics" is a better term than "Nice Guy" cause it really matches their behavior and/or belief that things will work out like a romantic story when wanting to date someone.
The "Nice Predators" on the other hand, like the one in your story, is a perfect term for those who purposely pretend to be nice just so they can get into a girl's pants. They're basically another type of (darker) pick-up-artist. So it's nice to see those kinds of guys get their comeuppance.

You're welcome please spread the word about that if that's okay with you.

Alright. I can't say "nice predators" come up often in casual conversation (and I usually use more colorful vocabulary to discuss such wretched people), but I'll spread the phrase around