Just wondering who was it that ran from the desk?

I dunno. Random guy.

I feel sorry for the guy, I hope the vixen doesn't pull that out on you.

Steroids will actually stunt growth in children, IRL anyway. Griggle may have had better help.

I'm curious to see where this is going.

ooooh, damn. Thanks for pointing that out.

Argh! You can't leave us hanging like that! Give us more!

..And a nice piece of writing, I must say, BNG. Bravo! *golf clap*

That's interesting, disturbing, and highly irregular.....I love it. X3

Hummmmmm...i like it. Very honest...very real...id give it a seven out of ten. Id deffinately read more. *smiles*

Hmm... If you hadn't said otherwise, I would have guessed that the vixen behind the desk was none other than Becky Cascane, musclevix extraordinare, but I suppose that she, just like the husky, is a random character for the purposes of the story.

In any case Griggle, this well-written and touching (first) part of this tale just shows that you have even more talent that merely visual.

Well done mate! :)

*ChaosCat*

Aww, thank ye :3

I was thinking becky when I read through it, but I never intended it X3 Ho well~

Dude...the Gods command you to write more. Seriously; they told me to tell you.

Awesome work, and I'm very much looking forward to seeing how this progresses.

Clever lighting. Nice.

MY FAVORITE PART:

"I got a house bought for me and all my bills paid every month by an organisation so scared I'll sue them they could build me another house with the amount of bricks they must shit each day."

And haha, oh my gosh, the guy ran away crying! She is scary! :I

Looks like she only chases off the guys that have all the muscle necessary and absolutely no idea how any of them work, or what they're called.

-Shift

Yeah, I see what you mean.

Interesting story, tho i though from the pic up top there was a comic with it but, oh well! ^^ Again thanks fo sharing, very nice!

Interesting...