
Were in the Park
A bit of fun inspired by the Halloween season.
A pair of young scallywags decide to make a bit of trouble for unsuspecting Trick or Treeters, not realizing their plans for trouble might have more wide-ranging effects. Until the affected shows up to explain things to them.
(Contains mild violance and transformation)
A pair of young scallywags decide to make a bit of trouble for unsuspecting Trick or Treeters, not realizing their plans for trouble might have more wide-ranging effects. Until the affected shows up to explain things to them.
(Contains mild violance and transformation)
Category Story / Transformation
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 85.7 kB
Listed in Folders
Pretty neat, big wuff! Good to see some stuff from ya again. I definitely like the premise of this one, and the scene where you described the light and the werewolf's eyes gave me shivers! XD Very well written. Something about it seemed different from your other stories though...
Feels good to be writing again as well. Glad you enjoyed it so! Nice to hear this wuffy's words can be so evocative.
Ah, you noticed the difference! Yup! Vargr was trying to keep this story under 1000 words. Setting that as a goal to see if wuff could tell a decent story, and still keep it short and 'tight'.
As a result, this wuff's more 'flowery' phrases and descriptions got clipped a bit, and the prose more terse.
Still couldn't quite make the goal though. It came in a bit over 300 words too long. Guess wuffy is just too loquacious for such limits. *chuckles*
Still, was a good exercise, and challanging.
Ah, you noticed the difference! Yup! Vargr was trying to keep this story under 1000 words. Setting that as a goal to see if wuff could tell a decent story, and still keep it short and 'tight'.
As a result, this wuff's more 'flowery' phrases and descriptions got clipped a bit, and the prose more terse.
Still couldn't quite make the goal though. It came in a bit over 300 words too long. Guess wuffy is just too loquacious for such limits. *chuckles*
Still, was a good exercise, and challanging.
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