Looking great, you really are improving at your drawing skils. Thanks a lot!

Thanks Puffy, Im glad you like, and thanks for that also, I will continue see more for lear

Although, the English translation has some mistakes.
Copy and paste this:

First meeting

Short Story
Coco Bandicoot was on the beach investigating the internet on her laptop, when she heard someone stealing boxes and it was not his brother, since he was sleeping next to her, so she decided to go and investigate on her own.
When she entered the jungle, she managed to observe a blue and red pastel skunk, which was making different movements, but when that skunk noticed her and approached Coco, it seems that it was lost in the clouds. XD

Coco: Hello, I'm Coco, who are you?
Puffy: ...
Coco: Are you okay? Are you a Cortex Creation?
Puffy: ...
Coco: Hi?, is there any brain in that head?
Puffy: * Spraying his gas *
Coco: Hmm ... this turned into something weird.

Thanks Puffy, maybe the next time you can help me with that, because I hate use the translator.

Sure, I can help you if you need it. Just wanted to change some things that looked weird.

Okay amigo

Btw, your title is mispelled. Its meant to say First Meeting, not firts meeting.

Fixed