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Darkwitt and the Facilitators: False Start
When Darkwitt is about to finally make his presence known in Aden's Peak as a new mover and shaker, he discovers just how complicated the game can be. When he is met by the Facilitators.
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So I've been fiddling with this for a little while. I'm apprehensive if people will enjoy it, but it's been relaxing to dabble. This is a story about how my character, Darkwitt, started down the path to become a Facilitator: a powerful figure who moves and adjusts society to maximize progress and discourage stagnation. The views expressed in this don't mirror my own, but coming up with these characters was a great deal of fun. If you are expecting some kinky fun, I must preface this with an apology. However, if people happen to like these characters and this story, I would be glad to write more. I have enough ideas for plot to last me a good while. Comments are greatly appreciated.
EDIT: This is indeed a full story. Download the PDF to read it. (I tried using .txt but it messed with the formatting. )
Art is by MysfitGoat. I do not know if he has an FA.
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<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
So I've been fiddling with this for a little while. I'm apprehensive if people will enjoy it, but it's been relaxing to dabble. This is a story about how my character, Darkwitt, started down the path to become a Facilitator: a powerful figure who moves and adjusts society to maximize progress and discourage stagnation. The views expressed in this don't mirror my own, but coming up with these characters was a great deal of fun. If you are expecting some kinky fun, I must preface this with an apology. However, if people happen to like these characters and this story, I would be glad to write more. I have enough ideas for plot to last me a good while. Comments are greatly appreciated.
EDIT: This is indeed a full story. Download the PDF to read it. (I tried using .txt but it messed with the formatting. )
Art is by MysfitGoat. I do not know if he has an FA.
Category Story / Fetish Other
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 75 x 120px
File Size 415.4 kB
Faved. I liked the overall progress, and the scenes were painted very well. That being said, I had to parse between who was speaking when, since you cluttered them all into paragraphs together, sometimes one after the other, and I noticed other proofing and grammar errors. If you ever need some help with proofing something, just send me a note. I enjoy your style, and I'd hate for others to be turned off just because of a few formatting issues.
A very intriguing story you wrote there. Quite...deep and fascinating, about the facilitators, their ideals and the whole background story.
Now I do sorta wonder, how the other Facilitators would react if one of that group would sorta...overstep one's border.
applauds you then You really have a good hand for writing very intriguing stories there.
Now I do sorta wonder, how the other Facilitators would react if one of that group would sorta...overstep one's border.
applauds you then You really have a good hand for writing very intriguing stories there.
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