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It took me FOREVER to write this. I was more or less dead for ideas. I knew how I wanted it to end. I knew what I wanted in the epilogue, but execution was a tremendous problem. i barely had one and a half pages down. Then suddenly, I was struck, out of nowhere, by inspiration and in just a few days, it went from 1.5 to about 12 pages just like that.
This is the final chapter of Journey Through the Darkness. It is Journey Through the Darkness 9: On the Road to Eternity. Also in it, is the Epilogue
Fun fact: This chapter is longer than my older submission: Data, and is the longest chapter of any chapter I've ever written for a fanfic.
Just as a warning. There is a bit of blood in this one. I know, unusual for me, right? But there is some blood and .. not really gore.. a little sorta gore.. but not really and it's just in this one part.
Oh, also, there is some light transformation content in this chapter. I forgot to mention.
Also, there were some tense errors and spelling errors I overlooked. They should be corrected and I replaced the file so as soon as it re-caches or whatever..
Ch. 1 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1456879/
Ch. 2 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1467818/
Ch. 3 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1511374/
Ch. 4 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1607822/
Ch. 5 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1695442/
Ch. 6 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1806250/
Ch. 7 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1901519/
Ch. 8 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2008432/
This is the final chapter of Journey Through the Darkness. It is Journey Through the Darkness 9: On the Road to Eternity. Also in it, is the Epilogue
Fun fact: This chapter is longer than my older submission: Data, and is the longest chapter of any chapter I've ever written for a fanfic.
Just as a warning. There is a bit of blood in this one. I know, unusual for me, right? But there is some blood and .. not really gore.. a little sorta gore.. but not really and it's just in this one part.
Oh, also, there is some light transformation content in this chapter. I forgot to mention.
Also, there were some tense errors and spelling errors I overlooked. They should be corrected and I replaced the file so as soon as it re-caches or whatever..
Ch. 1 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1456879/
Ch. 2 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1467818/
Ch. 3 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1511374/
Ch. 4 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1607822/
Ch. 5 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1695442/
Ch. 6 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1806250/
Ch. 7 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1901519/
Ch. 8 http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2008432/
Category Story / Transformation
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File Size 52.7 kB
likewise, I didn't expect Missing No to appear either. I enjoyed the entire series and can't wait to read, listen, and behold other things you have to offer.
On occasion, I was confused by usages of "ad" in lieu of and, "teh" instead of the, and similar typographical errors.
I thought the way you tied in the new "D/P/Pl" plot into the story was quite interesting, as it furthers my personal opinion that there needs to be abalance between forces, and because of that, our good friends at Team Rocket will never go away, but unless we are too lazy to fight at the right time, they will never get their devious goals done either.
I'm curious about how the TRAINS supercomputer, though suposedly invincible, met it's demise at the hands, or rather paws.... of bullets and an oddity from glitch city.
I love the descriptions, relished the suspence and give it a 10/10!
On occasion, I was confused by usages of "ad" in lieu of and, "teh" instead of the, and similar typographical errors.
I thought the way you tied in the new "D/P/Pl" plot into the story was quite interesting, as it furthers my personal opinion that there needs to be abalance between forces, and because of that, our good friends at Team Rocket will never go away, but unless we are too lazy to fight at the right time, they will never get their devious goals done either.
I'm curious about how the TRAINS supercomputer, though suposedly invincible, met it's demise at the hands, or rather paws.... of bullets and an oddity from glitch city.
I love the descriptions, relished the suspence and give it a 10/10!
I'm glad you enjoyed the story ^^
I didn't realize there were typos like that. I thought I caught them all when I made, like, the second or third reading ^^; but, well, I guess nobody's perfect
Thanks muchly. I mean, it'd been established in the anime at least, that TR is forming a base in Sinnoh. I just took that information and used it for my own story progressing. and of course. Team Rocket WILL never go away. even if it did, another evil organization would rise to take it's place. it's the balance between good and evil at work. no light without shadow and whatnot
the thing about TRAINSS is that it was supposedly invincible, and admittedly, its guard was down when first confronting Nathaniel. it has strong defenses, but it is still limited as to what it can do to protect itself. the minigun bullets were of a good enough strength to be able to rip through the casing, and MissingNo's superior speed and strength made taking down a stationary opponent easier than if Nathaniel had attempted to do so. also, while this may be a technicality, they're not really paws, so much as they are misshapen human hands with extraordinarily long claws
thanks for the 10/10 ^^
I didn't realize there were typos like that. I thought I caught them all when I made, like, the second or third reading ^^; but, well, I guess nobody's perfect
Thanks muchly. I mean, it'd been established in the anime at least, that TR is forming a base in Sinnoh. I just took that information and used it for my own story progressing. and of course. Team Rocket WILL never go away. even if it did, another evil organization would rise to take it's place. it's the balance between good and evil at work. no light without shadow and whatnot
the thing about TRAINSS is that it was supposedly invincible, and admittedly, its guard was down when first confronting Nathaniel. it has strong defenses, but it is still limited as to what it can do to protect itself. the minigun bullets were of a good enough strength to be able to rip through the casing, and MissingNo's superior speed and strength made taking down a stationary opponent easier than if Nathaniel had attempted to do so. also, while this may be a technicality, they're not really paws, so much as they are misshapen human hands with extraordinarily long claws
thanks for the 10/10 ^^
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