D': oh my god I see so much of myself in Paul it hurts

Gem your going to make me cry along with hundreds of others reading this story

Your user icon is how I feel that we won't get to see what happens next for a while....

I bet gem can hear this

of course she can. people in comas can hear everything people say

*Tears Up* Dang Gemmy! You sure know how to make people feel all the feels!

Also, that's a pretty big bag for just a little necklace.

That's the overnight bag he picked up for her so it has her clothes and pacifier etc in it not just a necklace silly

OOOooohh....hehehehe....


Wait! He brought her paci? Awww, he really does love her for who she is!!!! (By that I mean a big l'il squiggle!)

I have a sneaking suspicion that a side effect of the drug that she was given is urinary incontinence...permanent, urinary incontinence! That's just my guess though!

You haven't been reading the whole comic have you...also no about the incontinence thing :) sorry this isn't a fetish story.

Have too! Hehehehehe, it was just a guess after all!

I have but i don't remember it but dose he go in the drem thing gem is inor she remembers someting

NO, it's not a fetish story, it's a LOVE story, about loving others, and allowing others to love you.

I forgot to add, it's also a story, at least to me, about loving yourself, which is the most important love of all. If you can't love yourself, you can't love others, or allow them to love you. I get that from this story.

Title drop.

This is the most beautiful thing I have ever read in my entire life, and has moved me very deeply. Such powerful emotion packed into such heartfelt words has brought a tear to my eye, this is truly magnificent work and I deeply thank you for sharing it with us all.

Stop playing with my emotions

FEEEEEELS my god da feels

I hope his warmth and love can reach and save her from the darkness...

Oop no... Here come the waterworks..



I relate to Paul with my fox.. He is a hard one to reassure that I will love him forever and that he is stuck with me... Middle of the night over emotionall bun here..

-flops her face into the floor ugly crying-

Great comic so far though doing a good job being able to portray these emotions so well ^^

Oh my, it tooks me two days to read the whole comics, but wow, it's a really sad and hard story I wasn't expecting that
I feel rather bad now, not only for Gemma, but it also bring back some bad memories to me. You did an great job with it, stiring up so tough emotions to us.
Of course that's only my point of view, but I believe I'm not the only one to think that about it.
I just hope it's not based on a true story

Who put the onions in the room this is so sad but beautiful

Oh...umm...sorry, I was making burgers and like a lot of onion.

Awwww

aww thats cute, tho that face he makes in the last panel is a lil goofy XD

Hope you have a good time over there...

Paul might need some that experimental drug if he is to get into Gem's dream to rescue her and aid Souffle.

aaaw, thats love

have nice holidays and much fun at megaplex :3

Now that's a good touching scene

waited so long for this, i almost cried. good job on another great page

for some reason i thought he was about to say "phoenix down!" with that necklace

*small clap* I see what you did there xP

love the reference xD

Paul don't go having a break down now...

So sweet!

Annnnnnnnd thous the name of the comic is explained!

Annnyways that's a deep moment, but now let's see him say all that again when she is awake and can really hear him.

Awwwwwwwwwww! God bless you, Paul!

Really hope gem can hear him in her dream to help her fight back and wake up

I'm not crying there's some dust in my eyes

oh paul...surely your message of love will break through the nightmare and give Gem power to destroy her evil papa's power once and for all

Isn't there security footage? If so he can play it back and they can see "who" did it.

Wow Paul... That was actually sweet of you...

(starts to sniff) You know... it almost really reminds me of the time that I met and got to know that someone... and just like you won't let go of Gem.... I will never let go of Cessy here as well... Keep that determination and your love for Gem strong, Paul... ='3

That last frame. Just wow.

Title drop! Lovely page gem, truly shows Paul's feelings for gem

D'awww dat Paul's such a charmer. ^u^

Strong words !!! Paul is such a nice person ^^
Loveeee what a strong feeling

I look back to the first page, youve gotten so much better at your art, its amazing.

Paul is a good man.

Awwwww

Aww. That's the most wonderful thing... queue music:https://youtu.be/ZLcC0os5ZR0?t=2m

.... meanwhile in the collective minds of Gem, Jack, and Souffle: http://i.imgur.com/SfDSOHF.png

Awe thats so loving. You got me all teary eyed with how sweet that is.

I hope she wakes up soon, that Paul boy's a real keeper :3

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *melts*

awwwwwww :) so sweets :)

MY EYESSS!!!!
I can't stop from crying…
That's is so… sweet… so sappy… I mean that in a good way.

Wish I could find someone like that.

Man, what a guy. :D

Is that the mom necklace?

Words can't express how sweet of you that was, Paul. Hope this can break the cycle and bring down Jack, if nothing else!

I'm not going to cry... I'm not going to...

Well, no emotional outbursts from me, I kind of saw this from the last page, so not unexpected.

Sammy, your stories are great, thank you for touching out hearts with them.

Have fun at MegaPlex, send lots of photos and stuff to your Twitter account, and have tonnes of fun at Disney World. Don't get too hot, though!

See you in a couple of weeks.

AWWWWW.... Paul's a good guy. I just hope he gets his wish. Gem (and you) are real lucky.

I've always been a hopeless romantic. I like to think there's someone for everyone out there and we'll all find our someone someday. I know real life doesn't work like that, but I prefer being an optimist. I know you've got the plot already written as I often do, and it may not have a happy ending, but I hope at least it has an ending we can live with. *hugs*

Wonderful work. You know you're a good writer/artist when you can convey so much emotion in such a little page. Truly remarkable, and I don't give out praise like that lightly. I'd like to think I have some of the highest standards I know, and while I'll admit to my own mistakes (I'm not perfect), storytelling is a fine art, one requiring much more than just stringing words together. I've seen professionals, amateurs working for years, who just don't get it, and never will. Some people just can't. You've got the gift.

*gets teary eyed*

That's... Just... So... Cute... *starts to cry*

Hope that this act can vanish the Jack's darkness....

Bonus points (for me, at least) if it banishes only the darkness, leaving a purified and deeply remorseful Jack behind.

At least there is hope for Gemma...

I really wish I had the bravery normal guys do to talk to girls like Gemma and try to get into a relationship with them... Paul says all the things I want to say to girls I've known in the past but missed out on. His words are so beautiful and have real meaning, and I'd love to find someone who would respond to words like that.

Them Feels...

This is just so sweet and precious.
Loving and accepting someone for who they are, faults and all.

I feel for Paul and I cried so you suck lol anyway have a good rest and break as I writer I understand the need for a break and other things going on don't keep us waiting too long now

How touching...
*my brown eyes turned dark blue, communicating how moved I became after reading this page*
*tears welling up in my eyes*

you do like to attack my feels
this is one of my favorite things to read, star is a fun comic and gem is a comic that gets my feelings every time and i cant help but cry at some points and smile at others

I have been following this comic from the beginning (before joining FurAffinity). Really a big fan of your work toddlergirl (sorry, I used the w-word). This comic has really been an emotional roller-coaster for me. My real-life past memories resonate with this story on so many levels. I also can relate to a fair amount of the aspects these characters express within the story. I feel for Paul, I feel for Gemma and hope that there can be a resolution to this tragedy that has unfolded before my eyes before it is too late.

I'm melting. ;o;

I can't wait for next page.

When I read that line your imperfections your insecurities, it reminded me of some song with the lyrics "all your perfect imperfections" in it for some reason.

And for fits and giggles, "that's the power of love".

COME ON GEMMA WAKE UP FEEL THE POWER OF HOPE TO OVER COME THE DESPAIR!

Hah! I'll never find someone who loves me like that

let's go!

N-no, this can't possibly be happening... she can't live through this... I went through the pain of it once, a-and she hasn't, so I should be the one in her position. N-no... she can't go through the pain of it... I was in her position, unconscious, weary of the world around me, and after all that, I went into psychotic mode and nearly killed someone, so I hope she doesn't go that far... to end up institutionalized at her age, (Especially not at 19) I wish I was in her place, at least someone would have cared for me... And don't baby me about my past, therapy nearly made me kill myself. Twice. I cannot bear making someone feel my pain.