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yeah , made it recently , havent been on in a while , and now im coming down off greeeeen and drinking random leftover alcohool :P
anyhow comments perleeease
anyhow comments perleeease
Category Poetry / All
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File Size 825 B
Ah okay. I do say that these passages are quite strong. Sometimes when giving too much detail into something tend to confuse the reader. I happen to catch things in my poems that are clear to me, but are a bit confusing too.
I do like the way you use your words though. They personify alot of what you feel.
I do like the way you use your words though. They personify alot of what you feel.
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