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Chapter 6 of my Star Fox story, Ch. 1 is here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2321950 (see there for story description)
IMPLIED SEX. OH NOES!
I didn't make it mature because I don't think it's really all that bad. Maybe PG13, but definitely not R. AAAAAANYWHO, I felt really bad that I made people wait so long for ch. 5 that I took some initiative and began writing ch. 6. And finished it, surprisingly enough. Seriously, I am incredibly surprised by how short this chapter took me to write.
IMPLIED SEX. OH NOES!
I didn't make it mature because I don't think it's really all that bad. Maybe PG13, but definitely not R. AAAAAANYWHO, I felt really bad that I made people wait so long for ch. 5 that I took some initiative and began writing ch. 6. And finished it, surprisingly enough. Seriously, I am incredibly surprised by how short this chapter took me to write.
Category Story / All
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 40.7 kB
Oh GOD yes!
GREATEST STORY EVER! <3333333333333333335555
ugh, wolf is my favorite character!!! 8D!
Super cool it's about him :3
I loved your story a whole lot!
i really hope you can write more about wolf!!!!! :D!!!!
srsly, you got talent. If you make another star fox story, I would really really like to know!
(:
GREATEST STORY EVER! <3333333333333333335555
ugh, wolf is my favorite character!!! 8D!
Super cool it's about him :3
I loved your story a whole lot!
i really hope you can write more about wolf!!!!! :D!!!!
srsly, you got talent. If you make another star fox story, I would really really like to know!
(:
I just got done reading all of these.
I like 'em! It's really good how you worked this into the Star Fox universe. It actually fits with a little imagination! (not like it takes much, seriously, once they threw in Krystal and did Command, it was pretty much open ended if you ask me.)
I like how you presented all of the characters too. Panther moderates arguments and is sort of suave, check; Leon is an obnoxious bastard, check. There were a few lines in the series so far that Wolf said which seemed a little unbelievable, but, it works. Good job on the spelling and grammar too. I'm a TESOL minor and I've had nothing but honor's English classes since middle school, so I can pick up on a mistake or awkward sentence like it's nobody's business. I think that there is, at most, four or five grammar/spelling mistakes in the entire series so far.
I'm also a massive Star Fox fanboy. I'd love to try and collaborate on this, even if it's just proofreading it for you! Drop me an email or talk to me on AIM and let me know!
I like 'em! It's really good how you worked this into the Star Fox universe. It actually fits with a little imagination! (not like it takes much, seriously, once they threw in Krystal and did Command, it was pretty much open ended if you ask me.)
I like how you presented all of the characters too. Panther moderates arguments and is sort of suave, check; Leon is an obnoxious bastard, check. There were a few lines in the series so far that Wolf said which seemed a little unbelievable, but, it works. Good job on the spelling and grammar too. I'm a TESOL minor and I've had nothing but honor's English classes since middle school, so I can pick up on a mistake or awkward sentence like it's nobody's business. I think that there is, at most, four or five grammar/spelling mistakes in the entire series so far.
I'm also a massive Star Fox fanboy. I'd love to try and collaborate on this, even if it's just proofreading it for you! Drop me an email or talk to me on AIM and let me know!
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