
This is a story that I had been working on for about years. I managed to finished and posted right here. And this story took place before the "World Reviver" (http://nozo27.deviantart.com/art/Th.....er-1-595333020 ). Before I will continue writing on "World Reviver", I like to work on this series for while. I promise that there will be more pictures and writing. And sorry about grammar problem.
This story is non-Babyfur and also contain sad, pain, transformation and little bit of violence( not too much).
Prologue:
In a future world, the society have evolved and its technologies are highly advanced. But it has been changed over time as the world become more emotionless and lost its colors as it took. Worst thing that it has been happened is the history itself has been forgotten. People become more cruel and more emotionless as they were savages. In this world, there is place were cruel and emotionless to many people. There place like have more rule and dependent than independent, riches and royal get more powers, and have no mercy to all the sinner. The world itself has taken the wrong evolution and starting to become darker. People in this world had not realize that Destroyer will appear and put a destructive onto their world… Who will stop it before it will appear?
Chapter 1 Birth of Alter
In the prison called Darkness Reaper, there was many prisoners who were mostly world’s enemy. Some these prisoners were desired to destroy the world and tried to breakout there prison as they were hunger for freedom. Some them were used to assassin, soldiers, and also hero of the war. They know that can't get out from the facility and they only can wait for the death to come. Each day they will listen to the other scream as they were under torture, get executed and sometimes under mad experiment from Dr. Gigamax the mad scientist. Nobody know who is Dr. Gigamax and nobody know his real name at all. In this prison, the deeper floor is where most power prisoners were holds. These prisoner were very dangerous as they were psychic or had record of being most wanted criminal. They were bondaged tight and locked up pretty well as they were preventing from their escape. In very deepest of Darkness Reaper, the most very dangerous prisoner who were also psychic and had wanted criminal. The name of that prisoner is Alter…
Alter was locked up in the deepest part of Darkness Reaper as he was fully bondaged as his arms and legs were cuffed as it were chained to the wall. His torso were weighted as he was very heavy armor. His neck were cuffed as it act like steel collars. This armor was lock on the chest as it preventing from moving his muscle. Its has chains on the shoulder that connect through the wall. This armor can run electricity as it can taser him directly to his body, but it doesn't kill him so much. His head was masked with iron mask that covers entire head and also shape like a canine head. This mask prevent him from using psychic power. Alter can't see well under the iron mask as it was shaped like canine head. The ‘muzzle’ part of mask blocking some of his view. Somehow, he couldn't open or feel his mouth. He can still breathe through this mask, but it very uncomfortable to him as he have to breathe through his nose. He still see and heard under this iron mask. The prison itself wasn't very dark and dirty. It was more bright as white. He was sitting in uncomfortably as it were torturing his legs. In front of him, there was steel bars that formed cage and only way out is solid steel door which is right corner of cage.
Alter doesn't remember his past. He remember that he was under some kind mad experiment from mad scientist and during that experiment he lost most of his memory he had. Alter doesn’t remember where he came from or when he came. Alter doesn’t remember his comrade or leader. Alter doesn’t remember what he was used to be. And he doesn’t remember his old name. His name was given during the experiment for nickname. He was mistreated so much that his heart was filled up with despair and anger and he hadn’t eat or drink anything for more than a week as he felt. He only get rest for food for once a week, but he doesn't remembered or felt he had been fed. During that time, He was forced to sleep and being unconscious. When he regained consciousness, he was suddenly behind the bars. Somehow, they don’t let him die so easy as he was still used as experiment.
Alter felt so desperately wanted to get out of this prison. Then suddenly Alter heard a footsteps. They're getting closer to him. He knew that those footsteps are mostly belong to guards in the prison. He doesn't know who's footsteps belong to, but he knew that he will be put on torturous experiment. Then footsteps stop at behind the bars as he see two men with black protective suit. He knew they were guards and he was waiting to be taken away.
“Alright, it's time,” first guard opens the bar door as he unlocked the lock on the door. Then two guards walked closer to Alter as they get ready to take him away. Then they unlocked the lock on the chain and other restraint around him, except his mask and the armor. Then one of the guard pulled chain, which is connected to steel collars. Alter tries to resist as his muscles tired. Then another hold out remote and press the button on remote. Then Alter's armor started run electricity as it tased him violently. After few moments of tasing, Alter breathed harder under the mask as he was suffered from electric armor as he was wearing.
“Alright Alter, Stand up!” another guard ordered him. Alter did what he was been told. “Now walk you useless dog,” guard who holding chain pulled him and another watch his back to make sure that he doesn't do suspicious movement. Alter walk as he was ordered to do. When ever he slow down, guard on back will press the button and tased him. Alter has no choice but walk to his doom as walk on hallway like other guards does. When guard on front of him stopped, Alter himself stop as well as guard on back. They all stopped by double steel doors and that knew what lead to behind these two heavy doors. When the doors open by itself, two guards take Alter to the opened doorway as they entered it. Behind the hard steel doors, there was big wide room that has flat clinical looking bed. The room itself were circular instead of square. Then two of guard drugged Alter to the bed and forced him to lay on the bed as they lifted him up and put him the bed. After they put him on the bed, five thick metal handcuffs pop out from bed and cuffed all his arms, legs, and neck. Then the guards left the room leaving Alter alone.
“Now the experiment begin,” the voice echoes around room. Then a man came inside the room as he appeared to be scientist with fancy red mask. He was wearing white lab coat. “Greeting Alter,” said the masked scientist, “You know me as Dr. Gigamax. I'm here to continue with our experiment.” Dr. Gigamax, the mad scientist, pulled out the syringe that contains mysterious purple liquid that appeared to be more venomous. Alter already know that this man is mad scientist who use prisoners at here as his own lab rat. He tries to resist as he tries to break free from his fate as he know that this experiment are extremely dangerous. Then another scientist, who were woman, appeared from back of Dr. Gigamax as she worn same white lab coat as he was assistant for Dr. Gigamax and hold remote that used to activate Alter’s armor and pressed the button. When the button was pressed, electricity started run through the armor and shocked Alter violently.
“Don’t dare to disobey me Alter,” grinned Dr. Gigamax. “All I want is you to become the ultimate human soldier.”
After being electrified for few moment, Alter panted as he breathes through his nose. He has no choice, but obey his masked master, who’s also a mad scientist. Alter doesn’t wanted take anymore mad experiment. He just wanted end this torturously cycle.
“Now let’s resume this experiment,” Dr. Gigamax started walked closer to Alter as he was about inject the mysterious purple substance in syringe. Alter couldn't do anything except wait for his own death. Then Dr. Gigamax injected the half of purple substance on Alter’s right arm and another half on his left arm. “Now for next phrase,” Dr. Gigamax finished with injection on Alter. After injecting the purple substance, the assistant hand out another syringe that filled dark orange substance as it looked more deadly than last one to Dr.Gigamax. Alter couldn't resist anymore as he was about to accept his own death. Then Dr. Gigamax injected the malicious substance onto both of Alter's legs as did half on right and another half on left. After Dr. Gigamax used the injection, his assistant gave out another syringe with green substance as it were more deadly than other substance. Then he injected on Alter's neck as he watch the green substance goes into it. After finished with last syringe, he removed the syringe. Alter's body are crying as it were suffered too much from torturement.
“Now for final phase,” grin Dr. Gigamax. “shock him roughly!” Then female assistant press the button on remote. Then Alter's armor started run electricity and started to electrifying Alter so badly that voltage are very high that can almost kill him. “Yes, soon my creation will be complete.” Dr. Gigamax watched Alter suffered from electricity and he took few steps back as try not get shocked.
Alter couldn't speak any single word under harsh electricity. Suddenly somehow, he couldn't feel his muscles. His eyes are starting get darker as he couldn't see anything anymore. All his senses are losing rapidly. After few moments of dying, Alter close his eyes. He desired to be free from this prison and change this world forever.
“Sir, Alter’s pulse are getting weaker,” said the assistant as she was pulse reader as she was holding it. “Continue the process,” said Dr. Gigamax as he doesn't care about Alter. He mostly care about result of his experiment. He doesn't care his test subject dies right front of him. All he wants is success his experiment.
Suddenly, Alter felt something inside him as he regained his muscles control and somehow he was absorbing electricity in his body. After he absorbed many electricity, he discharged electricity as he unleashed them causing his armor to have spark of black plasma as it come out of it.
“Sir, Alter's pulses are returning and the protector started break,” assistant panicked as she was looking at the Alter's armor.
“What's this… This isn't what I hadn't in mind,” shocked Dr. Gigamax as he couldn't believe that something unexpected things happen as he would thought. Then Alter's armor bursted up and broke up into pieces as it scattered everywhere. Dr Gigamax and his assistant pushed away by this invisible forces that were came from Alter like big invisible waves that surround him.
“What just happened?” Dr. Gigamax stands up well as his assistant. Then suddenly Alter break free from the cuffs on the bed as cuffs itself has been broken. Then He stands up as he get off the bed. He looked around the surrounding as he was looking for escape, but the mask making him harder to see. Then he tried to remove the mask by grabbing mask off him.
“Doctor, he tries to break the mask off,” the assistant panicked as couldn't think any other way to prevent it.
“Set ALARMS!” Dr. Gigamax ordered.
“Yes sir,” assistant pushed the button on the wall as set up the alarm in entire prison.
When Alter forcefully removed his mask, it revealed that his head were Jackal instead of human. The furs covered entire head and up his neck and its color is light tan. Alter was normal human being at first, but somehow during the experiment, his head has been transformed into a some kind of canine. Alter felt different about his head as he had long muzzle on his face. He had not realized or prevented him to realized that his head had changed during the experiment. Then suddenly he finds the mirrored glass wall at behind the bed. When he looked at the mirror, he recognized that it was his own reflection and somehow he his head was completely different animals. Then suddenly Alter heard the bunch of footsteps behind him. When he turned around, he saw bunch of guards who were armed and point the guns at him.
“Alter, surrounded and…” Alter created wind slashes as he swing his arm horizontally and threw at guards before one of guard finished the warning. Then the wind slashes hit a foot of one of the guards and cause the explosion. It cause created smokescreen entire room. The guards started to coughing as they inhale some of smoke. Then Alter swiftly left the room without even noticing. When smoke is cleared, everyone in the room notice that Alter is gone.
This story is non-Babyfur and also contain sad, pain, transformation and little bit of violence( not too much).
Prologue:
In a future world, the society have evolved and its technologies are highly advanced. But it has been changed over time as the world become more emotionless and lost its colors as it took. Worst thing that it has been happened is the history itself has been forgotten. People become more cruel and more emotionless as they were savages. In this world, there is place were cruel and emotionless to many people. There place like have more rule and dependent than independent, riches and royal get more powers, and have no mercy to all the sinner. The world itself has taken the wrong evolution and starting to become darker. People in this world had not realize that Destroyer will appear and put a destructive onto their world… Who will stop it before it will appear?
Chapter 1 Birth of Alter
In the prison called Darkness Reaper, there was many prisoners who were mostly world’s enemy. Some these prisoners were desired to destroy the world and tried to breakout there prison as they were hunger for freedom. Some them were used to assassin, soldiers, and also hero of the war. They know that can't get out from the facility and they only can wait for the death to come. Each day they will listen to the other scream as they were under torture, get executed and sometimes under mad experiment from Dr. Gigamax the mad scientist. Nobody know who is Dr. Gigamax and nobody know his real name at all. In this prison, the deeper floor is where most power prisoners were holds. These prisoner were very dangerous as they were psychic or had record of being most wanted criminal. They were bondaged tight and locked up pretty well as they were preventing from their escape. In very deepest of Darkness Reaper, the most very dangerous prisoner who were also psychic and had wanted criminal. The name of that prisoner is Alter…
Alter was locked up in the deepest part of Darkness Reaper as he was fully bondaged as his arms and legs were cuffed as it were chained to the wall. His torso were weighted as he was very heavy armor. His neck were cuffed as it act like steel collars. This armor was lock on the chest as it preventing from moving his muscle. Its has chains on the shoulder that connect through the wall. This armor can run electricity as it can taser him directly to his body, but it doesn't kill him so much. His head was masked with iron mask that covers entire head and also shape like a canine head. This mask prevent him from using psychic power. Alter can't see well under the iron mask as it was shaped like canine head. The ‘muzzle’ part of mask blocking some of his view. Somehow, he couldn't open or feel his mouth. He can still breathe through this mask, but it very uncomfortable to him as he have to breathe through his nose. He still see and heard under this iron mask. The prison itself wasn't very dark and dirty. It was more bright as white. He was sitting in uncomfortably as it were torturing his legs. In front of him, there was steel bars that formed cage and only way out is solid steel door which is right corner of cage.
Alter doesn't remember his past. He remember that he was under some kind mad experiment from mad scientist and during that experiment he lost most of his memory he had. Alter doesn’t remember where he came from or when he came. Alter doesn’t remember his comrade or leader. Alter doesn’t remember what he was used to be. And he doesn’t remember his old name. His name was given during the experiment for nickname. He was mistreated so much that his heart was filled up with despair and anger and he hadn’t eat or drink anything for more than a week as he felt. He only get rest for food for once a week, but he doesn't remembered or felt he had been fed. During that time, He was forced to sleep and being unconscious. When he regained consciousness, he was suddenly behind the bars. Somehow, they don’t let him die so easy as he was still used as experiment.
Alter felt so desperately wanted to get out of this prison. Then suddenly Alter heard a footsteps. They're getting closer to him. He knew that those footsteps are mostly belong to guards in the prison. He doesn't know who's footsteps belong to, but he knew that he will be put on torturous experiment. Then footsteps stop at behind the bars as he see two men with black protective suit. He knew they were guards and he was waiting to be taken away.
“Alright, it's time,” first guard opens the bar door as he unlocked the lock on the door. Then two guards walked closer to Alter as they get ready to take him away. Then they unlocked the lock on the chain and other restraint around him, except his mask and the armor. Then one of the guard pulled chain, which is connected to steel collars. Alter tries to resist as his muscles tired. Then another hold out remote and press the button on remote. Then Alter's armor started run electricity as it tased him violently. After few moments of tasing, Alter breathed harder under the mask as he was suffered from electric armor as he was wearing.
“Alright Alter, Stand up!” another guard ordered him. Alter did what he was been told. “Now walk you useless dog,” guard who holding chain pulled him and another watch his back to make sure that he doesn't do suspicious movement. Alter walk as he was ordered to do. When ever he slow down, guard on back will press the button and tased him. Alter has no choice but walk to his doom as walk on hallway like other guards does. When guard on front of him stopped, Alter himself stop as well as guard on back. They all stopped by double steel doors and that knew what lead to behind these two heavy doors. When the doors open by itself, two guards take Alter to the opened doorway as they entered it. Behind the hard steel doors, there was big wide room that has flat clinical looking bed. The room itself were circular instead of square. Then two of guard drugged Alter to the bed and forced him to lay on the bed as they lifted him up and put him the bed. After they put him on the bed, five thick metal handcuffs pop out from bed and cuffed all his arms, legs, and neck. Then the guards left the room leaving Alter alone.
“Now the experiment begin,” the voice echoes around room. Then a man came inside the room as he appeared to be scientist with fancy red mask. He was wearing white lab coat. “Greeting Alter,” said the masked scientist, “You know me as Dr. Gigamax. I'm here to continue with our experiment.” Dr. Gigamax, the mad scientist, pulled out the syringe that contains mysterious purple liquid that appeared to be more venomous. Alter already know that this man is mad scientist who use prisoners at here as his own lab rat. He tries to resist as he tries to break free from his fate as he know that this experiment are extremely dangerous. Then another scientist, who were woman, appeared from back of Dr. Gigamax as she worn same white lab coat as he was assistant for Dr. Gigamax and hold remote that used to activate Alter’s armor and pressed the button. When the button was pressed, electricity started run through the armor and shocked Alter violently.
“Don’t dare to disobey me Alter,” grinned Dr. Gigamax. “All I want is you to become the ultimate human soldier.”
After being electrified for few moment, Alter panted as he breathes through his nose. He has no choice, but obey his masked master, who’s also a mad scientist. Alter doesn’t wanted take anymore mad experiment. He just wanted end this torturously cycle.
“Now let’s resume this experiment,” Dr. Gigamax started walked closer to Alter as he was about inject the mysterious purple substance in syringe. Alter couldn't do anything except wait for his own death. Then Dr. Gigamax injected the half of purple substance on Alter’s right arm and another half on his left arm. “Now for next phrase,” Dr. Gigamax finished with injection on Alter. After injecting the purple substance, the assistant hand out another syringe that filled dark orange substance as it looked more deadly than last one to Dr.Gigamax. Alter couldn't resist anymore as he was about to accept his own death. Then Dr. Gigamax injected the malicious substance onto both of Alter's legs as did half on right and another half on left. After Dr. Gigamax used the injection, his assistant gave out another syringe with green substance as it were more deadly than other substance. Then he injected on Alter's neck as he watch the green substance goes into it. After finished with last syringe, he removed the syringe. Alter's body are crying as it were suffered too much from torturement.
“Now for final phase,” grin Dr. Gigamax. “shock him roughly!” Then female assistant press the button on remote. Then Alter's armor started run electricity and started to electrifying Alter so badly that voltage are very high that can almost kill him. “Yes, soon my creation will be complete.” Dr. Gigamax watched Alter suffered from electricity and he took few steps back as try not get shocked.
Alter couldn't speak any single word under harsh electricity. Suddenly somehow, he couldn't feel his muscles. His eyes are starting get darker as he couldn't see anything anymore. All his senses are losing rapidly. After few moments of dying, Alter close his eyes. He desired to be free from this prison and change this world forever.
“Sir, Alter’s pulse are getting weaker,” said the assistant as she was pulse reader as she was holding it. “Continue the process,” said Dr. Gigamax as he doesn't care about Alter. He mostly care about result of his experiment. He doesn't care his test subject dies right front of him. All he wants is success his experiment.
Suddenly, Alter felt something inside him as he regained his muscles control and somehow he was absorbing electricity in his body. After he absorbed many electricity, he discharged electricity as he unleashed them causing his armor to have spark of black plasma as it come out of it.
“Sir, Alter's pulses are returning and the protector started break,” assistant panicked as she was looking at the Alter's armor.
“What's this… This isn't what I hadn't in mind,” shocked Dr. Gigamax as he couldn't believe that something unexpected things happen as he would thought. Then Alter's armor bursted up and broke up into pieces as it scattered everywhere. Dr Gigamax and his assistant pushed away by this invisible forces that were came from Alter like big invisible waves that surround him.
“What just happened?” Dr. Gigamax stands up well as his assistant. Then suddenly Alter break free from the cuffs on the bed as cuffs itself has been broken. Then He stands up as he get off the bed. He looked around the surrounding as he was looking for escape, but the mask making him harder to see. Then he tried to remove the mask by grabbing mask off him.
“Doctor, he tries to break the mask off,” the assistant panicked as couldn't think any other way to prevent it.
“Set ALARMS!” Dr. Gigamax ordered.
“Yes sir,” assistant pushed the button on the wall as set up the alarm in entire prison.
When Alter forcefully removed his mask, it revealed that his head were Jackal instead of human. The furs covered entire head and up his neck and its color is light tan. Alter was normal human being at first, but somehow during the experiment, his head has been transformed into a some kind of canine. Alter felt different about his head as he had long muzzle on his face. He had not realized or prevented him to realized that his head had changed during the experiment. Then suddenly he finds the mirrored glass wall at behind the bed. When he looked at the mirror, he recognized that it was his own reflection and somehow he his head was completely different animals. Then suddenly Alter heard the bunch of footsteps behind him. When he turned around, he saw bunch of guards who were armed and point the guns at him.
“Alter, surrounded and…” Alter created wind slashes as he swing his arm horizontally and threw at guards before one of guard finished the warning. Then the wind slashes hit a foot of one of the guards and cause the explosion. It cause created smokescreen entire room. The guards started to coughing as they inhale some of smoke. Then Alter swiftly left the room without even noticing. When smoke is cleared, everyone in the room notice that Alter is gone.
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