
A little while ago I saw this drawing that really made me want to work on my furry sci-fi universe that I drew my first attempt at a comic for a couple of years ago. While the comic was kind of a piece of shit, and will have to be redone now that I have more practice with comics, I'm more confident with the writing.
So, for the last year or two, I've been trying to write a book or something for this universe that I've had floating around in my head since I was a kid. I've tried writing things for it off and on, but decided finally to start on something serious, even though I have no idea if it'll go anywhere. Hopefully you all can help me out with that. I finished the rough draft for the first chapter in my book. It's about fifteen pages long here, and hopefully at least one of you all out there will read through it and tell me what you think. If you could let me know if you think this is something I should keep going on, or something I should just say "fuck it" with, I'd really appreciate it.
And since I can't think of a title for it at the moment, It's just going to be called "Triad's book". I'll probably change it when I think of something.
And to the three people or so who actually read the comic I tried to do a couple of years ago, the end of this chapter coincides with the beginning of the comic. You can dig way down in my submissions and see for yourself, if you're feeling up for an adventure, or if you're just bored. My guess is you're bored.
So, for the last year or two, I've been trying to write a book or something for this universe that I've had floating around in my head since I was a kid. I've tried writing things for it off and on, but decided finally to start on something serious, even though I have no idea if it'll go anywhere. Hopefully you all can help me out with that. I finished the rough draft for the first chapter in my book. It's about fifteen pages long here, and hopefully at least one of you all out there will read through it and tell me what you think. If you could let me know if you think this is something I should keep going on, or something I should just say "fuck it" with, I'd really appreciate it.
And since I can't think of a title for it at the moment, It's just going to be called "Triad's book". I'll probably change it when I think of something.
And to the three people or so who actually read the comic I tried to do a couple of years ago, the end of this chapter coincides with the beginning of the comic. You can dig way down in my submissions and see for yourself, if you're feeling up for an adventure, or if you're just bored. My guess is you're bored.
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Intriguing story, some great detail and description through out. The factions seem diverse in their interests and are rounded enough to keep conflict revolving in their universe. The Vulpinasians and their views remind me a little of house Steiner from mech warrior but that’s just a bad joke to begin with. So I wish you the best of luck with writing the continuance because it has much potential with your draft of characters and multiple factions. If you wish to discuss ideas for story development or would like me to critique anything just message and ask me.
Thank you very much for your comment. The story is definately going to have to re-worked, and I can always use other people's opinions to help make my work better.
And it's funny, I used to be into the battletech universe and all way, way, way back in the day. Funny that you should mention it, heh heh.
But thanks again, and I may very well be hitting you back up on the development front. :)
And it's funny, I used to be into the battletech universe and all way, way, way back in the day. Funny that you should mention it, heh heh.
But thanks again, and I may very well be hitting you back up on the development front. :)
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