The other half of the piece with Red... yes, no matter how realistically I am drawing Sugar, she must always have a heart-shaped nose.
Didn't do all of her markings yet either but was really pleased with the general pose even if she did end up coming out a little more trim than I intended (though since everyone thinks I'm about half the size I think I am, perhaps this is slightly more accurate than my mental picture of myself anywho).
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Didn't do all of her markings yet either but was really pleased with the general pose even if she did end up coming out a little more trim than I intended (though since everyone thinks I'm about half the size I think I am, perhaps this is slightly more accurate than my mental picture of myself anywho).
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Category Artwork (Traditional) / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 791px
File Size 788 kB
Aww, how kind of you to ask first! Critiques are welcome. My philosophy on them is, unless I specifically say something about a piece (like in the comments put "I would rather not be critiqued on this one for X reason") people should feel free to say whatever they feel they need or want to say about something. From there I am free to say "great balls of fire, you're right!" or "meh, I like it" or "didn't WE wake up on the wrong side of the bed this morning!" or whatever.
I'm still very much a beginner in the world of art, so critique is actually quite welcome to me. There are some things that I can tell are off without being able to tell how or why. Having lots of people suggest or point things out can't hurt, and if I'm lucky I'll be able to learn and grow from it and continue to improve, ideally at an even faster rate than if I'd just kept toddling along without it. ^_^
I'm still very much a beginner in the world of art, so critique is actually quite welcome to me. There are some things that I can tell are off without being able to tell how or why. Having lots of people suggest or point things out can't hurt, and if I'm lucky I'll be able to learn and grow from it and continue to improve, ideally at an even faster rate than if I'd just kept toddling along without it. ^_^
Glad to hear you say it... I think there's always room for all people to improve, and criticism is an important part of that... but some people just don't want it, so I generally don't like giving it unless asked.
I was going to say that the inside edges of her flaps may look smoother and more natural if they weren't as sharp. It's difficult to really describe what I mean but to say that maybe a single line accompanied by some shading would look better than a double line.
I was going to say that the inside edges of her flaps may look smoother and more natural if they weren't as sharp. It's difficult to really describe what I mean but to say that maybe a single line accompanied by some shading would look better than a double line.
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