Man destroys, man creates, man protects
World is playground, of forces of war
Explosives light up night, soldiers shout, scream, die
Forces of war, they destroy, the protect
End of this age is upon us, upon the planet
Who will win, who will lose everything
Shots, firing, explosives, voices of war
Fallout of nukes, spread around the world
Engulfing people in their sleep, in their daily things
Yet, hope is not lost, Pandoras box is not opened
Single man, stands against the power of destruction
Can he turn it, the force of destruction, towards force of creation
World stands still, people hold their breath
World of men stands upon this man
This single man, who defy the most horrific power of his race
Man creates, man destroys, man protects
Neverending circle, the Ouroboros, the great dragon
End is beginning, beginning is end
Man creates, man destroys, man protects
Inspired by Frontlines: Fuel of war
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World is playground, of forces of war
Explosives light up night, soldiers shout, scream, die
Forces of war, they destroy, the protect
End of this age is upon us, upon the planet
Who will win, who will lose everything
Shots, firing, explosives, voices of war
Fallout of nukes, spread around the world
Engulfing people in their sleep, in their daily things
Yet, hope is not lost, Pandoras box is not opened
Single man, stands against the power of destruction
Can he turn it, the force of destruction, towards force of creation
World stands still, people hold their breath
World of men stands upon this man
This single man, who defy the most horrific power of his race
Man creates, man destroys, man protects
Neverending circle, the Ouroboros, the great dragon
End is beginning, beginning is end
Man creates, man destroys, man protects
Inspired by Frontlines: Fuel of war
Comments please
Category Poetry / Human
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The ideas and symbolism of the poem are great. The word choice is great and conveys both the horrors of mans ilk and some of our greatest gifts. The rhythm, rhyme and poetic flow are not very strong, but thats not important when it comes to poetry and comes with time, practice and skill. The main thing is presenting ideals end emotions that portray man kinds conscience and spirit which you have done quit well. The poem is good, always love ones done in the form of Poe’s the Conqueror Worm. Keep writing you have great ideas.
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