That was kind of an interesting story about a transformation of a species I barely see before. I kinda wish you didn't go that simple with the muzzle growth at the end.

With the stories I've read of toons tricking people, I keep wondering how they actually react to someone who was actively defying them and it made me think of something like this will happen: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OZXfa0NRzGg (WARNING: Trailer of the new sci-fi, open world, survival horror game: We Happy Few. Where the main character tries to escape a creepy land full of drugged-up happy people who want him to be the same as them) Though I'm referring to the cinematics at the beginning and the end of the trailer. But it gave rise to an idea putting the commissioner's idea of toons along with the dark undertones I've been thinking, which is against what the toons are actually doing here. I assume the toons actually only transform people who are miserable and would benefit greatly from being a toon with no human memories as opposed to changing just anybody.
The idea is about a guy who figures out what the toons are trying to do to him so he defiantly or smoothly rebuff their advances and tricks. But then these strange toons started chasing him soon after like the We Happy Few police and the strangest thing is.... those guys never existed before and it goes against what the toons normally do to get people to transform. So begins the big mystery surrounding these guys and the philosophical debate between the methods of normal toons and bad toons.
I began to see it as an adventure thing with multiple endings like:
The standard game over ending which ends with the guy being toned.
Two different bad endings where the guy pretty much alienates himself from the toons and effectively everyone else or his poor choices ended up endangering toons somehow.
Two different good endings where he becomes friends with the toons and the bad toons simply disappear or he successfully got away from them.
And a true ending where he works together with his new toon friends to solve the mystery surrounding the bad toons.

I think that's all I wanted to get out and being honest and everything. I really don't want to insult people who enjoys these kinds of TFs but forceful transformations are still forceful transformation, even if they're put in a happy or funny vibe, which is what the trope Esoteric Happy Ending. Which is why this idea is made. I'm not saying I'm not guilty of making those endings myself, but that's how I feel when it comes to people being tricked into transforming and treating the brainwashing of the person like it's no big deal. Granted it doesn't take away my enjoyment of the transformation process itself but for some reason the Esoteric Happy Ending thing hits harder for me when it involves toons.

I haven't read this story, and I'm confused, intrigued, worried...???

I don't know whether this story is the second Neon Genesis Evangelion but kinkier and furry or you're just some weird, weird guy.

I just finished reading it and...

What??????????

The story itself is pretty fine with a regular mental change in the end, but with sheer amount of these TFs having mental changes, it's pretty hard not to inevitably imagine a horror like scenario from them. Especially if you're someone who's doesn't like these kinds of changes but tolerates them... Of course bringing up shame to the authors who write them is not good thing in any sense of the matter, but breaking points happen no matter how mild.