Okay, you saw the digital line-art
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24759107/

which (like this one) has a link to the previous step and of course information about what's going on.
I have no doubt in my coloring skills as any who have been following me knows that I've been actively coloring for quite some time now.

I'm requesting critque on everything, tips on the lines, tips on tracing/putting the sketch onto a computer, etc. I really want to get good at this for my daughter Ibbit (not her irl name), I'll give mlp freebies too when I feel I'm competent enough (I actually would like to make a pick and click base). (i know it's not a great finalized piece... hence the request for critique... what do I need to fix.. what am I doing wrong?)