Interesting sounds ya'h got there. Wasn't quite what I was expecting, but not bad. :p

To be honest, I was kinda expecting a remix of the theme song from "Static Shock", the cartoon. xD


And as for something challenging:
Try something with longer sound? :3

It sure sounds like 30 minutes. It's all over the place.. and gross.

Ya know, perhaps you should stop wastiing your own time looking and commenting on all of these then if you're so appalled by them. There are many messy or "different" genres of electronic music out there. Like dex for an example. It being a bunch of choped up electronic pieces that do not always go with the music. Some people like that shit. So how about you take your excessively negative criticisim and go somewhere else where someone cares.

i like it :3

My thought: did it finished? Why did it end?

It sounds good, even more when you know its made in 30 minutes.
I never challanged myself in doing something like that. Maybe it works for me too, to make different things than just the patterns I always use. :3