Heya!
Im not so good in English, but i used a dictionary, and the most of your short-story i understood without any problems ^.^ Seriously, your writing style is amazing! Earlier i wrote some stories, but that stopped years ago. But i had such an imagination as Kayr started to tell his stories to the small and intrested group. And i didnt knew, that Gold Ring is so huge and that are slums too, some gangs making trouble and all the million of people living in. Im really glad that you desribed so much details of the living style here! I thought that the Sailzane desert is more peaceful, but now i know that it was an epic fail XD The sundown, the first shadows falling and they are listening his stories, really, please write more stories! Its very flowing writing style. And its so cute as one shouted "Hey, Mister Ringo!" So adorable
I hope you could understand what i wrote here in my bad english... How i said, i would be so happy to read more of your imagination and knowledge about this amazing world.
Greetings, Sansha :3

Thank you for your kind words! This was just an one-shot story as a test-drive.

In the future if I do decide to post up more, it'll probably be about my own character.

I have created my own canon about the Shigu and how it formed, it also includes a resistance group founded by Rain's anonymous lover.