oh wow this is nice o.o i love the guy he's adorable!

*Hugs the poofy one and gives her a paper bag to breath into.*

You have talent, though maybe several large road block in the way of getting your manga out.
To help I will show you a EVIL site that helps create characters. http://tvtropes.org/
It is EVIL since people can spend days or weeks lost in clicking links.
Just type a character, show, game or other that you like in the search, find a trope that is about what you like about it and get information on the trope itself.

This is good for you to do, and a good challenge for you.
Even if you don't win, but you give it your all, think how much you'll improve and learn.
It is in the direction you want to go...
And my new favorite quote by Beckett
Ever Tried. Ever failed. No matter. Try again. Fail again. Fail better.

It takes time, you'll be able to do it. <3

You can do it, Wolfy. This is awesome work.