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Alrighty, so this here is another one of my revamps, just wanted to clean it up for POSSIBLE future publication and all! =P
The meter should be MUCH smoother now, so it sounds better when read! \(^o^)/
ALSO, while revamping this baby, I actually found a HIDDEN meaning in it, a meaning that apparently was lost on me when I wrote it! D8
Bottom line: One shouldn't fear death! (as hard as that sounds) =/
Anyhoo, this poem was inspired by one of
Ertrestar's AWEsome pics which can be found "here."
If you'd like to make comparisons with the OLD version, you can find it in my scraps --> "here"
Anyhoo, please tell me what you guys think of the NEW version! =3
Until NEXT poem! ;D
The meter should be MUCH smoother now, so it sounds better when read! \(^o^)/
ALSO, while revamping this baby, I actually found a HIDDEN meaning in it, a meaning that apparently was lost on me when I wrote it! D8
Bottom line: One shouldn't fear death! (as hard as that sounds) =/
Anyhoo, this poem was inspired by one of
Ertrestar's AWEsome pics which can be found "here."If you'd like to make comparisons with the OLD version, you can find it in my scraps --> "here"
Anyhoo, please tell me what you guys think of the NEW version! =3
Until NEXT poem! ;D
Category Poetry / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 111 x 120px
File Size 1.8 kB
Hehe, d'awwwww, thanks! ^^;
I'm glad I good make this one sound a WHOLE lot better, especially since I find it to hold one of my more INTRIGUING concepts. =P
ALSO, Soka, please forgive me for not reading up on your latest works; in truth, I pretty much have NO good excuse as to WHY! D:
I ask that you give me an electronic slap, and look forward to me reading up and commenting on some of your stuff soon! :>
I'm glad I good make this one sound a WHOLE lot better, especially since I find it to hold one of my more INTRIGUING concepts. =P
ALSO, Soka, please forgive me for not reading up on your latest works; in truth, I pretty much have NO good excuse as to WHY! D:
I ask that you give me an electronic slap, and look forward to me reading up and commenting on some of your stuff soon! :>
No prob Crim, I really appreciate the comment! =P
Yeah, this is definitely one of my DARKER poems, but still quite AWEsome with a nice moral-ending! ^^
Also,
riddle_me_this told me the SAME thing about my work, being a "gem" among the other unpolished stones! x3
Yeah, this is definitely one of my DARKER poems, but still quite AWEsome with a nice moral-ending! ^^
Also,
riddle_me_this told me the SAME thing about my work, being a "gem" among the other unpolished stones! x3
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