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Yeah, I hope everyone enjoys it, though I ask if someone can think of a better title perhaps. And I would also appreciate opinions.
Category Story / All
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I quite liked your piece of writing.
Potential titles: Vengeance Dances
if the sword is significant: Bayonette's Thirst
if the sword is to become the main characters weapon: Bayonette's Master
If Revenge is the the total result or there is a twist in the ending: Twisting Revenge might work.
Look at where you intend the story to go, grab a thesaurus and find words that describe the journey your characters will take. Revenge works as a chapter sub-title very nicely however.
Keep going and good luck with this, great start.
I hope someone bothers to read my stuff one day. I read as many pieces as i can and if i like it or am asked to say something i do.
Potential titles: Vengeance Dances
if the sword is significant: Bayonette's Thirst
if the sword is to become the main characters weapon: Bayonette's Master
If Revenge is the the total result or there is a twist in the ending: Twisting Revenge might work.
Look at where you intend the story to go, grab a thesaurus and find words that describe the journey your characters will take. Revenge works as a chapter sub-title very nicely however.
Keep going and good luck with this, great start.
I hope someone bothers to read my stuff one day. I read as many pieces as i can and if i like it or am asked to say something i do.
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