kool, nice start for the first chapter, i can remember the cartoon in which the Headmasters and Targetmasters first appeared so i found it easy to follow. good work =)

Yar! Love how you portrayed Galvatron! Even though I still dislike him compared to Megs...^^; The way you played him out was good, none the less! And poor Cyclonus...oh well, thats what you get for working with a crazy loon I suppose. XD I've never seen the Headmaster's show (only heard of it) so I can only guess at whats going on-still, I am entralled by the tale and await more! :D

getting interesting

Wow. Very interesting and sweet story, cynergi.