The day of revenge had come! Emberflame, Shadow, Turt, and Talion all team up to take down the Metagross that had attacked them previously, but will things go as smoothly as planned? Or is there even more to this than anyone could imagine?



I swear with that description i could have called this chapter Foreshadowing instead, but meh. I like the pun more when it comes to Chapter 14. This was also one of the more fun parts to write; though I can't say its one of my favorites either. It feels a bit cliche in places, but overall I felt like it came out well despite it.

From the future me, over in chapter 28 I can safely say this is my least favorite chapter. Looking back on it, it was just... really poorly written. A clear rush job for the sake of showing off Emberflame's unique Mega Evolution and it has more than a few badly used Cliches in it. For those who want a better telling of this chapter, even if it isn't canon, You can find that here. (Whenever its written; the link will go here.)

Again, sincere apologies for this... Train wreck of a chapter. I'm none too proud of it, but you can't rewrite history like this, its set in stone for better or worse. But the least I can do is make it so that a better telling is out there.

Clearspring and Virtue; along with Doc Leaf belong to  tastytales

Emberflame, Shadow, Turt, Talion, and Jerome belong to me.

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