
A commission of me transforming into my Fursona because of the howls of the pack.
Original with small Story: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24963119/
Art by the amazing
stickmanwww
Original with small Story: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24963119/
Art by the amazing

Category All / Transformation
Species Wolf
Size 1280 x 738px
File Size 290.5 kB
So, like, he's getting transformed by sound waves, is what's happening? Gotta hand it to ya for imagination.
I definitely appreciate the trick with the pond reflection. Since it's farther right on the page, it can be perceived as further along in time, and can save you a panel.
Also, HOLY CRAP a BELLY BUTTON! You don't see many of those around here.
I definitely appreciate the trick with the pond reflection. Since it's farther right on the page, it can be perceived as further along in time, and can save you a panel.
Also, HOLY CRAP a BELLY BUTTON! You don't see many of those around here.
I definitely think the content of this sequence has potential for expansion. Three or four pages, maybe.
What I'm getting at is the 'Call of the Pack' could've been fleshed out a bit, presented more as an invitation, one that you try declining but something deep within won't allow you to. I think that's what you were after; the flavor text stickmanwww provides touches on that theme, but by the time your mental conflict is addressed, it's already stated that you've been sprouting fur, so the link between you accepting the Call and you TFing into one of the pack is not as firmly established as it could be. All that can be said, definitively, is that some bizarre property of the wolf howls is making you a werewolf.
So if that bit of nitpickery wasn't too annoying, I was a little curious about the comic text. There's the big golden "Awooo" and the skinnier black "Awooo"s. Feel free to tell me different, but since the big golds overlap your arm and ears I'd say this is your "Awooo", the one you want to make, and the skinny black "Awooo"s that surround but never touch you are from the rest of the pack, whom I sincerely hope are also the proud owners of belly buttons.
What I'm getting at is the 'Call of the Pack' could've been fleshed out a bit, presented more as an invitation, one that you try declining but something deep within won't allow you to. I think that's what you were after; the flavor text stickmanwww provides touches on that theme, but by the time your mental conflict is addressed, it's already stated that you've been sprouting fur, so the link between you accepting the Call and you TFing into one of the pack is not as firmly established as it could be. All that can be said, definitively, is that some bizarre property of the wolf howls is making you a werewolf.
So if that bit of nitpickery wasn't too annoying, I was a little curious about the comic text. There's the big golden "Awooo" and the skinnier black "Awooo"s. Feel free to tell me different, but since the big golds overlap your arm and ears I'd say this is your "Awooo", the one you want to make, and the skinny black "Awooo"s that surround but never touch you are from the rest of the pack, whom I sincerely hope are also the proud owners of belly buttons.
I saw the big gold ones as the ones that rang the loudest and are what starts the transformation, while the other small ones are the pack members (who I think also have belly buttons) joining the "chorus" of howls, which ends when I give in to both the physical and mental changes to give my own howl.
Also I welcome criticism.
Also I welcome criticism.
Darn. I thought I was on to something.
That's always good. In truth I usually don't actually type everything I think about people's stuff. If ya spend a good amount of time typing about an artist's stuff and then that artist ignores you, either for being too on the nose or disappearing into the rest of the praise, then you might as well have not commented.
That's always good. In truth I usually don't actually type everything I think about people's stuff. If ya spend a good amount of time typing about an artist's stuff and then that artist ignores you, either for being too on the nose or disappearing into the rest of the praise, then you might as well have not commented.
I am disappointed at the lack of facial hair on the sides of your face like the original wolfman.
Do you mind me inquiring if you have similar features to the human in the comic, is the human based off yourself, if so do you have sideburns/muttonchops irl but thought to exclude them from this comic?
Thanks CJMPinger.
Do you mind me inquiring if you have similar features to the human in the comic, is the human based off yourself, if so do you have sideburns/muttonchops irl but thought to exclude them from this comic?
Thanks CJMPinger.
A bit odd of a question to ask but I'll answer. The human presented is meant to be similar in appearance to me, and so could be considered based off of me. And on the mutton chops part, the photo used for reference did not have prominent mutton chops present but due to a slight lack of consistent shaving on my part I kinda have mutton chops in real life as of responding to this comment.
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