This is the longest piece of fiction I've written in years (5 pages) and the first dramatic piece that I've ever gotten to something like finished. I may add more, and it's not formatted "properly" yet, but here it is.


Comments appriciated :)

It was inspired by this picture:


http://www.furaffinity.net/view/248294/


I also recorded the beginning of it (up to "are you still so certain you wish to marry me"), though I revised some of the dialogue since then:



Furtopia Thread with Audio Scene:


http://cgi.furtopia.org/cgi-bin/ib3.....ry257698464101