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Part 3 of Rita's 'epic saga,' and the ending as well. This one is also pretty short, but since I'm taking so long to get anything out, I felt best to just work a bit of the story at a time. However, since I feel this story has gone on needlessly (even though I originally planned on ending on part 5), I've decided to wisely wrap up the story and let it end. But, since I wanted to really drill how screwed up Jim and the Chrome Works company is, I took off the kid gloves, and really pulled no punches on the ending.
To be honest, I'm not sure if I regret making this story. It was really spur of the moment, I just wanted to have Rita do something. I didn't know what, just SOMETHING. I was mostly "ad-libbing" the story, and it shows. But I felt the story has gotten to the point where there was no where else to go, and just decided to end it.
Although I may or may not regret starting the story, I do want to make more stories of Rita, just to show off her character - and just about all of my characters too, which is more or less the point of creating them, but I digress a little. I hope to actually try to make the stories more oneoffs, and avoid breaking them into parts.
Incidentally, I was asked questions from certain folks about Rita's robotic physiology - you know who you are - and I had an idea of Rita going into the worker's lounge and interacting with the workers, having them ask Rita questions, and Rita herself answering about herself (in her own way). But like I said, I wanted to end this story, it's long over due, however I do hope to make up for this with another story of Rita. I'll most likely have Rita be with more friendly folks so that Rita can be more honest and friendly about herself. I may even have "special guests" ;3
To be honest, I'm not sure if I regret making this story. It was really spur of the moment, I just wanted to have Rita do something. I didn't know what, just SOMETHING. I was mostly "ad-libbing" the story, and it shows. But I felt the story has gotten to the point where there was no where else to go, and just decided to end it.
Although I may or may not regret starting the story, I do want to make more stories of Rita, just to show off her character - and just about all of my characters too, which is more or less the point of creating them, but I digress a little. I hope to actually try to make the stories more oneoffs, and avoid breaking them into parts.
Incidentally, I was asked questions from certain folks about Rita's robotic physiology - you know who you are - and I had an idea of Rita going into the worker's lounge and interacting with the workers, having them ask Rita questions, and Rita herself answering about herself (in her own way). But like I said, I wanted to end this story, it's long over due, however I do hope to make up for this with another story of Rita. I'll most likely have Rita be with more friendly folks so that Rita can be more honest and friendly about herself. I may even have "special guests" ;3
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Really good story, and one thing comes to mind:
Don't be like Jim. Jim is an asshole who doesn't like robots. We shall shun him.
Update: Also that new shorter story and those ideas sounds really good for the future, written works are just as good as visual works. c: I could really imagine the whole building and the city, really good storytelling potential! Don't let it go to waste. :3
Don't be like Jim. Jim is an asshole who doesn't like robots. We shall shun him.
Update: Also that new shorter story and those ideas sounds really good for the future, written works are just as good as visual works. c: I could really imagine the whole building and the city, really good storytelling potential! Don't let it go to waste. :3
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