
I've been trying to upload my mp3's but it won't work, so I'm trying with a different approach by submitting this story I made in the 9th grade & rehashed it before my summer vacation began this year.
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In terms what does brign the most happiness to us in life
what we think that's important to us and all what brings us together
is what can bring love.
Love can show in many ways to friends and lovers
Love can sometimes be a burden
but if we trust our feelings and our
doubts as one we can carry over and over
with blessing a joy
Wealth is alright but does it really show love some yes
but can be another factor as life burden
wealth can never bring love or happiness
just Selfcenter and evil at times
Beauty can bring some but not our truselfs alike
what we think that's important to us and all what brings us together
is what can bring love.
Love can show in many ways to friends and lovers
Love can sometimes be a burden
but if we trust our feelings and our
doubts as one we can carry over and over
with blessing a joy
Wealth is alright but does it really show love some yes
but can be another factor as life burden
wealth can never bring love or happiness
just Selfcenter and evil at times
Beauty can bring some but not our truselfs alike
i really enjoyed this. it was well written and makes me think. wealth brings happines at times. eternal youth is only good if you have a loved one to share it with. i would prefer the love. ive seen familys as rich as can be and torn apart by the money. and ive seen familys dirt poor but love one another dearly. i think the love would make anyone happy.
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