Okay, so what happened since the last time I posted an update about my attempts to create a story?

Bad news: turns out the story I had in mind was bigger than my ability to tell it coherently. Oops.

Good news: it was still practice, and I discovered what moved me forward, what brought everything to a halt, and where I could simplify.

So, here we go again. Learning from my mistakes, this image shows two short stories I'm creating (each will be five pages when finished). When I finally get them done I'll move on to Kickstarter or just use them on social media as bait to build an audience.