A Few Little Extra Snacks (com)
by yoshi121
A novice freelance writer
8 years ago
My very first bit if commission for
Zandaxes ! It was a lot of fun to write and I really appreciate him coming to me! I hope to do many more of these in the future.
Any constructive criticisms are always welcome as always.
I am still open as well if anyone would like one as well~
Characters belong to:
Zandaxes
Story written by me~
Zandaxes ! It was a lot of fun to write and I really appreciate him coming to me! I hope to do many more of these in the future. Any constructive criticisms are always welcome as always.
I am still open as well if anyone would like one as well~
Characters belong to:
ZandaxesStory written by me~
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Fat Furs
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Asside from a few errors, such as using the wrong tense and other minor grammatical errors, I really enjoyed it! Congrats on your first commission btw, here's to many more!