Would this mean no more comedy and will shift into a dark theme?

No. There still will be comedy. It shall be a political satire. But no racist humour and such...

Glad you like this version more^^

perhaps hmm "the Kolder" actually they could be responsible, i wrote this story...
(no one read it past chapter one).

but its possible

I would think the best is; all of a sudden they are there, figure it out later when whomever shows up with they're blackmail.

oh comments on the graphic, use the front of a ship instead of the black only do the ship in red, (ie red shift in stars as it applies to speed of light which has a theory that includes time travel as a result)
keep everything else.

A Spaceship? nah. To Sci-Fi like^^ Though thanks for the idea

no a sailing ship

I don't think that would work, really, but maybe I got the idea wrong

a sailing ship like a brigatine, the one Capt. Kumbartha uses?! or does he float a great harry? a four masted five decked 120 cannons per side, warship of the 1750's england. a brigantine also called a privateer if a warship, (though the captain of the brigantine usually is the privateer, well anyway...) using ther ship in red-shift with a graphic the way it is now would intrige those that don't know what it is about.

else you will constantly be telling the story of how they got there, ad nausum. ie Spiderman, bitten by a radioactive spider giving him incredible strength and the ability to climb walls...ect. ect. every Spiderman tells you whether you know the story or not in each and every time spiderman is issued. had they used a graphic they might only need it. just a suggestion, from the other side of the pond.

AND one man will come to strike.....

there will always be somebody. That pounces the mithy king down. What is kidna funny but true