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Yep, it's another quickie sonnet guys! =D
Though it was done quick, I assure you ALL the emotion is there. ^^
Now then, THIS poem is actually an inspirational response to
twilightrat's recent poem --> "Snowfield"
It's MY kind of free verse! ;D
Lastly, the usage of the words "thread" & "strand" HAVE purpose. Can anyone guess what they're relating to in this scenario. The answer is KINDA flexible! ^^
Anyhoo, enjoy guys! Apparently I can never TRULY be on poetic hiatus, can I? lol
Until next poem! \(^o^)/
Though it was done quick, I assure you ALL the emotion is there. ^^
Now then, THIS poem is actually an inspirational response to
twilightrat's recent poem --> "Snowfield"It's MY kind of free verse! ;D
Lastly, the usage of the words "thread" & "strand" HAVE purpose. Can anyone guess what they're relating to in this scenario. The answer is KINDA flexible! ^^
Anyhoo, enjoy guys! Apparently I can never TRULY be on poetic hiatus, can I? lol
Until next poem! \(^o^)/
Category Poetry / Human
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File Size 621 B
Well, that was pretty good... your use of thread and strand mystify me though... perhaps an old wound, or two people who fought, one dying and the other suffering a lasting wound, the survivor reminiscing. Or maybe it was a traveler lost in the snow, who found a way into the speaker's heart, only to be claimed by shades of ice
Stop impressing me!! I swear my head'll asplode if you fill it any more amazing poetry!! x3
My guess for strand & thread: Two who loved like there was no tomorrow {could possibly have been married, etc.}, that love withered leaving them alone against the cold {possibly divorced, etc.}.. And they want each other back.
My guess for strand & thread: Two who loved like there was no tomorrow {could possibly have been married, etc.}, that love withered leaving them alone against the cold {possibly divorced, etc.}.. And they want each other back.
Hehe, well, I'll go ahead and reveal the answer, since I think you'll be the LAST person to really read this! =P
Basically, the thread/strand represents a "lifeline," set up between two people. It's like two people linked together during mountain climbing, so that they will ALWAYS be together. =D
Though, when one person became lost, buried in the snow (a metaphor for life), the thread began to weaken! (o.o)
So, the other friend DESPERATELY searches for his partner/mate (depends), and attempts to free him/her from the pressure of life itself, for it's better to live with someone who can share your burdens! =O
Well, that's it! ^^;
I really appreciate your comments, and yeah, sonnets are kinda difficult because the rhyme scheme is STRICTLY: abab, cdcd, efef, gg AND it must be in iambic pentameter. =)
Of course, meter isn't that easy for many poets as of late, which is why they slink on over to free verse. (>.>)
*sigh*
My writing style is archaic, but I do what I love! \(^o^)/
Basically, the thread/strand represents a "lifeline," set up between two people. It's like two people linked together during mountain climbing, so that they will ALWAYS be together. =D
Though, when one person became lost, buried in the snow (a metaphor for life), the thread began to weaken! (o.o)
So, the other friend DESPERATELY searches for his partner/mate (depends), and attempts to free him/her from the pressure of life itself, for it's better to live with someone who can share your burdens! =O
Well, that's it! ^^;
I really appreciate your comments, and yeah, sonnets are kinda difficult because the rhyme scheme is STRICTLY: abab, cdcd, efef, gg AND it must be in iambic pentameter. =)
Of course, meter isn't that easy for many poets as of late, which is why they slink on over to free verse. (>.>)
*sigh*
My writing style is archaic, but I do what I love! \(^o^)/
Well, to each his own, man! =P
I'm glad you grasp the meaning of the poem though! =3
Although, as for the meter, I'm not QUITE sure what you mean, as this is a sonnet, which uses STRICT iambic pentameter! =O
And, I'm a meter-head, so I wouldn't DARE post anything that doesn't follow the rules! (o.o)
Perhaps it's how you read certain words? Maybe "rekindling"? It's actually 3 syllables, not 4. =)
So it's "re-kin-dling."
I dunno, but it's all gewd man! ;3
I'm glad you grasp the meaning of the poem though! =3
Although, as for the meter, I'm not QUITE sure what you mean, as this is a sonnet, which uses STRICT iambic pentameter! =O
And, I'm a meter-head, so I wouldn't DARE post anything that doesn't follow the rules! (o.o)
Perhaps it's how you read certain words? Maybe "rekindling"? It's actually 3 syllables, not 4. =)
So it's "re-kin-dling."
I dunno, but it's all gewd man! ;3
Well I'm glad to hear that from ya Max! ;3
And as for you question...it's surprisingly....BOTH! D8
I'd love to explain it via MSN whenever you'd like. ^^
However, did you read the linked poem in the comment box? =P
That MIGHT help with the interpretation, as I wrote this as a sort of sequel to it. x3
And as for you question...it's surprisingly....BOTH! D8
I'd love to explain it via MSN whenever you'd like. ^^
However, did you read the linked poem in the comment box? =P
That MIGHT help with the interpretation, as I wrote this as a sort of sequel to it. x3
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