I know it's okay you two *hugs*

thanx *hugs back*

The overall meaning i got from this poem is good although i still think its kinda jumpy with its rhyme / the verse's

dude thanx for the feed back

dude thanx for the feed back

Atonement...

Atonement can last eternity

The Purgatory...

big white room * It's fuckin boring in here *

Thanx man and why is it hard to believe I wrote this I mean I may have a soul but i can be dark at times but mostly angry

A very awing poem. Total dream/folklore blow out matter if intended or not. I enjoy the first few Stanzas greatly. Interesting enough was listening to Last Rites when reading this totally mind numbing effect. A very encompassing poem swallows you whole and spits you out very grand job for any poem that is great reads the reader and reflects them and keeps them till the end and after words all they can do mouth agape staring at the walls in wonder and in awe.

Why thank you for such a positive return and yet i am still confused yet i can understand your point

Well that just brought me back a bit.

Felt like I went through something similar to the narrator (or you. I dunno)
We all burn a couple years before we're even gone. Seems depressing, endless and like we're in hell.
But when its all said and done, we're stronger for it and our mind and body prepare us for whatever the world wants to toss at us.

*ahem* I'm prattling on now... Point being; good poem, I loved it and felt a connection. :3