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For those who liked the series, I have picked it up where 
Davage left off. He believes the story has met it's end, and I accept that Blake's story has been told. But there is another potential story that I plan on telling.
From here on, the story moves away from Blake, and towards his genes and the geneticist that discovered it: Bryan. Now there's not much going on in this chapter, but it sets up for something much, MUCH better.
For those who may just be discovering this series, here's a link to the first:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2494706/
Original characters and story by
I hope this lives up to the series Davage started.
Davage left off. He believes the story has met it's end, and I accept that Blake's story has been told. But there is another potential story that I plan on telling.From here on, the story moves away from Blake, and towards his genes and the geneticist that discovered it: Bryan. Now there's not much going on in this chapter, but it sets up for something much, MUCH better.
For those who may just be discovering this series, here's a link to the first:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2494706/
Original characters and story by
I hope this lives up to the series Davage started.
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 34.5 kB
I'm currently reading, and so far enjoying, but there's a slight continuity error D:
Earlier in the story, I had Bryan tell Blake that his gains would gain momentum through adolescence, and that they would begin to slow once he reached his 20's.
I don't believe I'd set an end to his gains though. If his gains begin to peter out in his early twenties, it does make sense that they'd end between 38-40. (At 36 I'd imagine he probably wouldn't even be gaining a pound a week anymore).
So yeah, I just finished and I like where it's going and it's awesome and huzzah and.... that's about it xD *faves and goes to advertise in his journal*
Earlier in the story, I had Bryan tell Blake that his gains would gain momentum through adolescence, and that they would begin to slow once he reached his 20's.
I don't believe I'd set an end to his gains though. If his gains begin to peter out in his early twenties, it does make sense that they'd end between 38-40. (At 36 I'd imagine he probably wouldn't even be gaining a pound a week anymore).
So yeah, I just finished and I like where it's going and it's awesome and huzzah and.... that's about it xD *faves and goes to advertise in his journal*
Yeah, going back it looks like I missed that part. I did try to keep it in line with the original (I had it open while I wrote) but I guess I missed a little detail.
I do expect to have the next chapter have quite a few responses. There's no weight gain in it, but there's one line that would make furs want to be involved. Chapter 9 should start showing weight gain and continue on from there.
This wasn't my best work, but I wanted to set the new story in motion so I could get motivated to keep working on it. I should have chapter 9 up in an hour or so, so keep an eye out for it.
I do expect to have the next chapter have quite a few responses. There's no weight gain in it, but there's one line that would make furs want to be involved. Chapter 9 should start showing weight gain and continue on from there.
This wasn't my best work, but I wanted to set the new story in motion so I could get motivated to keep working on it. I should have chapter 9 up in an hour or so, so keep an eye out for it.
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